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2016年9月15日雅思大作文题目

More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantages for environment?

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Just 50 years ago, to own a car was quite a luxury, but today, cars have found their way into many households. Statistics show in China alone, there are over 140 million cars running on road every day. While cars have brought about conveniences to their users, they have imposed great pressure on the environment.

解析：1. 本段用比较方法引出话题，然后用数据补充，最后重述题目观点。这种做法可以让段显得生动活泼。如果千篇一律地使用如下开头，则会使文章没有生机：A. With the development of the society, more and more people buy and use their own car.B. When it comes to the car ownership and use, many people think they are good to the individuals but very bad to the environment.

这两种典型的作文开头法虽然可以，但正因为其，就显得没有任何个性，而显示出作者的个性，是作文得到高分的必需。引用数据或者通过比较来引入话题，就显得更为独特。

2. luxury 奢华3. find one’s way to/into... 进入到...... (比简单的enter显得更为地道，生动!)4. in China alone...仅仅在中国 (这里的alone与孤独没有任何关系，表示“仅仅”)5. impose pressure on... 给......施加了压力

Modern city life has made the car an indispensable means of transport. Though most cities today have fairly advanced transportation systems like the bus and metro, they tend to be extremely crowded, especially in rush hours. This means you might come to your office late or miss some important appointments. If you drive your own car, these problems may well be avoided. At the same time, when you plan to take your family for a trip out of town, you may also enjoy the flexibility of when to start off and when to return, rather than spending time waiting for the bus to arrive.

解析：1. 本段论证汽车给人们生活带来的便利：是公交或地铁太拥挤，可能因此上班迟到;第二是全家出去旅游时更灵活。2. indispensable 不可或缺的3. means of transport / transportation 交通运输工具4. rush hours (上下班)高峰期5. flexibility 灵活性

However, the increased use of cars has caused serious consequences for our environment. Many experts, for instance, attributes the worsening air quality in big cities tothe cars’ exhaust gas emission and the dust that rises after them. This accusation is perhaps well-grounded if you make a little comparison between the air quality 50 years ago and that now. In addition to the waste gas and dust, cars also make unbearable noises, which is a headache to all city dwellers. Just imagine a time you are shocked awake from your cozy dream by the sharp braking screech of a car passing by your house!

1. 本段讨论汽车对环境的影响，一是造成了空气质量下降，二是造成了很多噪音。本段最后一句也是一个个性表达的范例!2. consequences 后果3. attribute...to... 将......归因于......4. exhaust gas emission 尾气释放5. well-grounded 有依据的6. city dweller 城市居民7. screech 尖叫声

In my view, it is unrealistic for the government to put a ban on the car ownership or use since the cars have been so important in our daily life, yet we cannot overlook the negative effects they have on the environment. To get out of this dilemma, to my mind, there are twooptions, the first being to develop car technology and produce cars that burn less fuel and the second, encourage the car owners to use public transportation whenever possible.

1. 本段表达自己的观点，提出汽车和环境都需要，并因此提出了两个选择方案：一是设计耗油少的汽车，二是鼓励大家尽量选坐公共交通。2. unrealistic 不现实的3. overlook 忽视4. dilemma 困境5. option 选择6. ...there are two options, the first being to develop car technology... 该句后半部分是独立主格结构，因此用being，而不能用is。在有把握的前提下，偶尔使用一下这种高端句型，有可能给考官留下好印象。如果没有把握，就要老老实实地写：...there are two options. The first one is to develop car technology...

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