2016-09-14 19:36来源:上海新航道雅思作者:上海管理员
摘要:2016年9月3日雅思写作Task2范文及解析(广告媒体类)
9月3日雅思写作Task2题目:
Some people think having more TV channels is good because they will have more choices. While other people think too many TV channels only lead to a lot of poor quality TV programs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
9月3日雅思写作范文:段
With the development of digital technology come the numerous TV channels that have mushroomed into our life. Statistics show globally there are more than 15,000 different TV channels, and in China alone, the number is 1300! Many people do not like this development, suspecting the rapid increase of channel number will only lead to mediocrity in quality. While this suspicion may contain a grain of truth, I still believe in more channels mainly for two reasons.
新航道团队解析:段
开头段,先引出电视频道越来越多这一现象,然后重述题目的观点,最后提出自己的观点。
在描述现象时,唐老师引用了数据,并有statistics show...来引出数据。
mushroom本来是“蘑菇”,也可以用作动词,像蘑菇一样迅速生长。
...the rapid increase of channel number will only lead to mediocrity in quality是对题目原句...too many TV channels only lead to a lot of poor quality TV programs的重新表述。Mediocrity 是“低劣,一般”的意思。
...may contain a grain of truth, 意思为“......也许有一些道理”。多数烤鸭可能都会使用“...is true / reasonable in some ways / aspects / respects” 这样的句型。
9月3日雅思写作范文-第二段
Obviously, more channels provide TV viewers with more opportunities to enjoy their own favorite programmes. As far as I know, some TV viewers are more interested than others in educational programmes which give them knowledge in specialised fields. At the same time, there are some viewers who would like to be entertained and others who would watch TV as a window to the outside world. To cater to the tastes of different viewers, it is important that we have various channels, such as news, music, movies, sports and travel, among others. Undoubtedly, when more and more channels spring up, there may be some poor quality channels, but with many channels competing for viewers, chances are that we can enjoy programmes of higher quality.
新航道团队解析:第二段
本段论证赞同多频道的个理由:可以欣赏更多节目。很显然,这里需要讲不同观众有不同的需要。唐老师在写作时,注意变换了不同的句型,如some TV viewers are more interested in ...; there are some viewers who would like to...
Cater to... 迎合;照顾
Chances are that... 有可能。烤鸭们都会it is possible that...; it is likely that...
9月3日雅思写作范文-第三段
More importantly, more channels give viewers the freedom of choice. When offered a great variety of TV channels, one sitting in front of TV may have some difficulty deciding what to watch, yet this feeling is more a “sweet” bitterness, just like what we experience when we go into a supermarket and are at a loss about our choices. If you do not think much of this freedom, just try to imagine what you would feel when you could only watch one channel and one programme, even if it were the best one in the world!
新航道团队解析:第三段
本段论证支持多频道的第二条理由:选择自由。利用比较和假设两种方法来论证选择自由的重要性。
When offered a great variety of TV channels, one sitting in front of TV may have some difficulty deciding... 这是一个过去分词短语前置做状语,更一般的句型是这样的:When one is offered a great variety of TV channels, he/she sitting in front of TV may...
Have some difficulty doing... 做......有些困难
9月3日雅思写作范文-第四段
To conclude, more channels can give TV viewers more opportunities and freedom of choice, which are far more important than anything else, including the possible drop of quality of some TV programmes.
新航道团队解析:第四段
本段是结论段,总结了前文的理由,重述自己的观点。
注意唐老师在行文上如何避免与前文重复。
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