2023年新航道托福写作新题型范文集：Your professor is teaching a class on gender. Write a post responding to the professor’s question

4月11日，ETS在北京召开了全球发布会，宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息，托福考试迎来全面改革!

自2023年7月26日起， 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内，取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作，可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓：“短”和“学术”。

►关键字1：“短”：

改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作，而现在只要求100字，当然时间也缩短到10分钟。

表面上看，输出速度没有变化，都是10字/分钟。但是，构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思，再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”：2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言，然后形成自己的思路，马上动笔，绝 对不能拖泥带水。

►关键字2：“学术”：

旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目，比如《你愿意在家吃饭，还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备，只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。

改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你：在过去的两个世纪，推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想，这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备，比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然，学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。

为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数，今天小编整理了2023年新航道托福写作新题范文集，本篇文章的主题是Your professor is teaching a class on gender. Write a post responding to the professor’s question一起来学习一下吧。

12023年新航道托福写作话题：

Your professor is teaching a class on gender. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

In your response you should:

• express and support your opinion

• make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

2托福写作新题范文示例1：

Dr Gupta

As traditional gender roles continue to evolve, there has been a noticeable shift in the distribution of household responsibilities, with more fathers staying at home to care for their children while mothers pursue careers outside the home. From your perspective, do you believe that this trend is positive or negative? Why or why not

Tom

I believe that fathers staying home to take care of their children is a positive development.

When fathers take an active role in raising their children, it can strengthen the family unit and lead to greater equality in the household.

Jerry

While it's important for fathers to be involved in their children's lives, I think it's a negative development when fathers are the primary caregivers and mothers are the breadwinners.

After all, it could place a greater financial burden on mothers and the family as a whole.

32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2：

I strongly agree with Jerry’s idea that such a role reversal may not be a positive development.

I’d add that women are usually more patient and have maternal instincts, which are crucial features when caring for a child. However, men tend to excel in their great executive and decision-making ability employed more frequently in the workplace. In this case, men involved in their children’s lives may be less competent in child-rearing than women and both genders cannot exploit their advantages to the full. Regarding Tom’s point, it is true that fathers’ role in raising children can lead to improvement of family relationship and gender equality, but men can also assume the responsibility for bringing up children even if they work outside. For example, after work they can accompany and care for the child, sharing some household chores with their wife, which means that family bond and equality may not be impacted adversely. Overall, then I would say that it seems an unreasonable choice for men to care for their children at home.

AI 打分及评语

Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.

There are a few grammatical errors that detract from the overall quality of the response. For instance, the sentence "For example, after work they can accompany and care for the child,

sharing some household chores with their wife, which means that family bond and equality may not be impacted adversely" should be revised to "For example, after work, they can

accompany and care for the child, while sharing some household chores with their wife, which means that family bonds and equality may not be adversely impacted." The sentence

contains a run-on phrase, a subject-verb disagreement, and a dangling modifier, which makes the sentence less clear.