2023年新航道托福写作新题型范文集：Your professor is teaching a class on life science. Write a post responding to the professor’s question

4月11日，ETS在北京召开了全球发布会，宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息，托福考试迎来全面改革!

自2023年7月26日起， 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内，取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作，可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓：“短”和“学术”。

►关键字1：“短”：

改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作，而现在只要求100字，当然时间也缩短到10分钟。

表面上看，输出速度没有变化，都是10字/分钟。但是，构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思，再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”：2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言，然后形成自己的思路，马上动笔，绝 对不能拖泥带水。

►关键字2：“学术”：

旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目，比如《你愿意在家吃饭，还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备，只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。

改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你：在过去的两个世纪，推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想，这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备，比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然，学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。

为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数，今天小编整理了2023年新航道托福写作新题范文集，本篇文章的主题是Your professor is teaching a class on life science. Write a post responding to the professor’s question一起来学习一下吧。

12023年新航道托福写作话题：

Your professor is teaching a class on life science. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

In your response you should:

• express and support your opinion

• make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

2托福写作新题范文示例1：

Dr Gupta

As medical technology and advancements in healthcare continue to improve, the average life expectancy in developed countries is steadily increasing. However, with this increase in

life expectancy comes a range of potential problems that can affect both individuals and society as a whole. What are some of the issues that might arise from this trend?

Tom

While it's certainly a positive thing that people are living longer, this trend presents a number of challenges for individuals and society as a whole. One major problem is that an aging

population places a greater burden on healthcare systems, as older people tend to require more medical attention and treatment.

Jerry

I disagree with Tom. It is important to acknowledge the benefits of longer life expectancy. An aging population can also lead to greater wisdom, knowledge, and experience. Advances in

technology and medicine may help reduce some of the burdens associated with an aging population.

32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2：

I totally agree with Tom's statement that increased longevity of people could bring a great many challenges for public and society as a whole, such as imposing a huge burden on

healthcare system. Moreover, I'd add that this phenomenon has created tremendous pressure on government finance. To be more specific, faced with a rising number of senior

people, governments have to allocate a large amount of budget to some areas, including personal insurance, medical expenses or pension and so forth, which means funding

invested in other realms might decrease. For example, in Japanese government's annual budget for 2023, as much as 36.8 trillion yen is set aside to deal with the increasingly serious

aging problem. Consequently, the budgets of some other areas, like education, national defense or public construction, are likely to be reduced accordingly, considering

government's annual revenue. Regarding Jerry's point, life extension does bring greater wisdom, knowledge and experience. Nevertheless, with the society developing in an

accelerating rate, the merits they possess, to a certain extent, might be outdated and not suitable for what is currently happening. Therefore, I think longer lives would give rise to

more problems.

AI 打分及评语

Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.

1. The writer has a few grammatical errors, such as missing articles ("a rising number of senior people" instead of "the rising number of senior people"), and incorrect verb tense

("have to allocate" instead of "has to allocate" to agree with "government").

2. The writer could benefit from clearer organization and transition between their ideas, as some of the points seem disconnected.