雅思写作包含两个部分，在备考过程中，很多同学会把重点放在分数比重更大的大作文上。其实，就备考时间比较短的学生来说，小作文才是重中之重，因为只要掌握好小作文的几个采分点，那么这一部分的分数就会出现明显提升。

那么，要想在task-1这一部分取得好的成绩，我们到底最需要关注什么，词汇，语言还是疯狂的把每一个数据和细节都写下来?其实，大部分学生甚至是很多老师，最容易忽略的结尾段，才是整个小作文最重要的部分。就小作文在Task Achievement的评分标准来说，里面有一要求，叫做“present anoverview of main trends, differences or stages”。考官明确提到学生过分关注而没有一个“bigger picture”的描述，而这个所谓的“大画面”就是结尾段所做的事情。

那么，结尾段到底该做什么事情呢?我的建议是至少写两句话：一句介绍整幅图的概况，另一句凸显特殊值。下面，以剑7test-2文章为例：

 

结尾段可以是： Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chickenincreased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased overthe period(四个线的概况，一个上升，三个下降). In addition,although fish remained the least popular food, its consumption levels were themost stable(凸显特殊值，鱼肉最少但最稳定).

再看一个剑8的文章：

 

结尾段可以是：Overall, teachers' salariesconstituted the largest cost to the school, and while spending increaseddramatically for equipment and insurance, there were corresponding drops inexpenditure on things such as books and on other workers' salaries.(and前面说老师的薪水，是凸显极值;and后面说有两个上升和两个下降，是对整体情况的描述)。

再来看剑8一位8分的学生范文，看一下该同学是如何描写bigger picture的：

Overall，over this span of 28 years, the quantities of goods transportedby road, water and pipeline have all increased while the quantities transportedby rail has remained almost constant(整体概况，三个上升一个几乎持平). In addition, the road remains themost popular method of transporting goods in the UK while water and pipelinesare becoming increasingly used, have not become more popular as a method oftransport(强调特殊值)

(备注，此文来自剑8第168页，在文章中，这两部分内容，作者是分开写的，前一句在段，后一句在最后一段。其实笔者看来，两句话完全可以合在一起，作为一个充实的overview写在结尾)。

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