2023年托福写作新题型范文集：Your professor is teaching a class on political science. Write a post responding to the professor's question

4月11日，ETS在北京召开了全球发布会，宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息，托福考试迎来全面改革!

自2023年7月26日起， 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内，取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作，可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓：“短”和“学术”。

►关键字1：“短”：

改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作，而现在只要求100字，当然时间也缩短到10分钟。

表面上看，输出速度没有变化，都是10字/分钟。但是，构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思，再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”：2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言，然后形成自己的思路，马上动笔，绝 对不能拖泥带水。

►关键字2：“学术”：

旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目，比如《你愿意在家吃饭，还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备，只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。

改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你：在过去的两个世纪，推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想，这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备，比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然，学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。

为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数，今天小编整理了2023年托福写作新题范文集，本篇文章的主题是Your professor is teaching a class on political science. Write a post responding to the professor's question一起来学习一下吧。

12023年托福写作话题：

Your professor is teaching a class on political science. Write a post responding to the professor's question.

In your response, you should:

• express and support your personal opinion

• make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

2托福写作新题范文示例1：

Professor

As you know, city governments have a responsibility to improve the lives of residents. In today's class we're going to discuss the best way for them to do that. What strategy do you

think governments should use to improve the overall quality of life of residents?

Maria

I think investing in infrastructure should be the main priority for every local government. This could include things like repairing roads and bridges, expanding public transportation, and

improving access to clean water and sanitation. Good infrastructure can improve people's daily lives, make it easier to get around, and attract new businesses and residents to the

area. It can also prevent serious accidents and protect us from illnesses that damage our health.

Tom

While I agree that infrastructure is important, I think that social programs should also be a major focus. The government could invest in things like education, affordable housing, and

healthcare, which can help address issues like poverty, inequality, and access to basic needs. By providing these types of services, the government can help improve people's well-being. These are things that everyone benefits from … unlike a road which is only used by people who drive cars.

32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2：

It is right for Maria to prioritize the investment infrastructure because this would benefit people in traveling and the overall health of citizens. Tom’s advocacy of some social programs is also reasonable. However, I believe that the government should put more effort in developing AI. With the widespread use of driverless cars, the incident of road accidents will be greatly reduced; with the widespread use of robot vacuum cleaners, housewives would free themselves from the tedious and repetitive household chores, and with the widespread use of surgical robots, the precision of operation can be improved. In a word, AI can contribute to improving the overall living standard of residents in different ways, so financially supporting AI is a wise decision for every local government.

AI 打分及评语

Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.

The sample answer contains several grammatical errors that can be fixed:

In the first sentence, "It is right for Maria to prioritize the investment infrastructure" should be corrected to "It is right for Maria to prioritize investing in infrastructure".

1. In the same sentence, "the overall health of citizens" should be corrected to "the overall health of the citizens".

2. In the third sentence, "However, I believe that the government should put more effort in developing AI" should be corrected to "However, I believe that the government should put more effort into developing AI".

3. In the same sentence, "the incident of road accidents" should be corrected to "the incidence of road accidents".

4. In the same sentence, "housewives would free themselves from the tedious and repetitive household chores" should be corrected to "people would free themselves from the tedious and repetitive household chores".

5. In the same sentence, "precision of operation can be improved" should be corrected to "the precision of operations can be improved".

6. In the last sentence, "financially supporting AI is a wise decision for every local government" should be corrected to "financially supporting AI would be a wise decision for every local government".

Here's the corrected text:

"It is right for Maria to prioritize investing in infrastructure because this would benefit people in traveling and the overall health of the citizens. Tom’s advocacy of some social programs is also reasonable. However, I believe that the government should put more effort into developing AI. With the widespread use of driverless cars, the incidence of road accidents will be greatly reduced; with the widespread use of robot vacuum cleaners, people would free themselves from the tedious and repetitive household chores, and with the widespread use of surgical robots, the precision of operations can be improved. In other words, AI can contribute to improving the overall living standard of residents in different ways, so financially supporting AI would be a wise decision for every local government."