2023年新航道托福写作新题型范文集：Your professor is teaching a class on sociology. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

4月11日，ETS在北京召开了全球发布会，宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息，托福考试迎来全面改革!

自2023年7月26日起， 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内，取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作，可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓：“短”和“学术”。

►关键字1：“短”：

改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作，而现在只要求100字，当然时间也缩短到10分钟。

表面上看，输出速度没有变化，都是10字/分钟。但是，构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思，再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”：2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言，然后形成自己的思路，马上动笔，绝 对不能拖泥带水。

►关键字2：“学术”：

旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目，比如《你愿意在家吃饭，还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备，只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。

改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你：在过去的两个世纪，推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想，这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备，比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然，学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。

为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数，今天小编整理了2023年新航道托福写作新题范文集，本篇文章的主题是Your professor is teaching a class on sociology. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.一起来学习一下吧。

12023年新航道托福写作话题：

Your professor is teaching a class on sociology. Write a post responding to the professor’s

question.

In your response you should:

• express and support your opinion

• make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

2托福写作新题范文示例1：

Dr Gupta

As we discussed in class, the issue of world hunger is complex and has yet to be resolved. Some argue that only wealthy governments and corporations have the ability to effectively address the issue, while others believe that every individual can contribute to the solution. In a similar vein, policy makers must prioritize which issues should receive the most attention and resources. For instance, should governments allocate more funds towards education or environmental protection? As a policy maker, which issue would you prioritize and why?

Tom

I firmly believe that world hunger can only be effectively addressed by wealthy governments and large companies. The scale of the problem is simply too massive for individual efforts to

make a meaningful impact. For example, these entities have the resources and reach to invest in sustainable farming practices. What can one person do in the face of such a complicated issue?

Jerry

I respectfully disagree with Tom's stance. Individual actions can indeed make a difference.

For instance, each of us can donate to hunger relief organizations. We can also make changes to our own lifestyles, such as reducing food waste and supporting sustainable food practices. Collectively, these actions can add up to a significant impact on the issue of world hunger.

32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2：

World hunger has been recognized as one of the main challenges that we have to overcome in the 21st century. To address this concern, I believe wealthy governments and individuals should join forces and make their contribution. On the one hand, the famine problem is normally on a global scale, which means the lack of food in underdeveloped area is always caused by the lack of cooperation and advanced technologies from developed nations. In this case, wealthy governments and corporations could provide some advanced agriculture technologies to help those countries suffering hunger. For example, some genetically modified seeds could be provided from China to African countries in order to feed starving people. On the other hand, despite the contribution from wealthy governments, individuals should take the initiative to implement some changes. That is because the shortage of food is closely related to everyone’s everyday life. For instance, citizens’ awareness as to save food should be raised, and teenagers should be educated to finish all the dishes in every meal.

AI 打分及评语

Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.

It effectively meets the criteria of the prompt by expressing an opinion and making a valuable contribution to the discussion with relevant and well-elaborated explanations and details.

However, there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures that could be improved with editing.

The response has a few errors, including:

1. The phrase "famine problem" is not an accurate description of world hunger, which is caused by a variety of factors and not just famine.

2. The use of the phrase "genetically modified seeds" may be controversial and not universally accepted as a solution to world hunger.

3. The sentence "That is because the shortage of food is closely related to everyone’s everyday life" is unclear and may not make sense in the context of the argument.

4. The example given about educating teenagers to finish all the dishes in every meal is not directly related to addressing world hunger and may not be a significant enough contribution.

5. The response could benefit from more specific and detailed examples to support the argument.