2020年7月18日托福独立写作真题范文 | 忘年交~

7月18日(2/2)托福独立写作

    朋友类话题又成为考题啦! !   

Some students prefer to make friends with people who are aboutthe same age.Other students prefer to make friends with peopleof different ages. Which way do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and example to support your choice.

   Introduction    

朋友话题千万遍

不如套话来一遍

It is always said that friends in one’s prime would become the ones for whole life. This can exactly explain why teenagers always want to make more friends and expand their social circle. However, opinions are split on which age group they prefer when choosing the friends. For me, generation gap is never the obstacle in the likelihood of friendship.  

解读

适当针对话题进行一定的背景套路勾画

可以快速节省时间引入文章主题

    Body    

枯燥的学生生活

乘风破浪而来的忘年交

First of all, the same aged company means a more repetitive life. Students are the ones to have a fixed lifestyle even the similar schedule in daily life in which their routine is going to school then back home. When they become friends either with classmates or those juveniles as well, the always-exiting topic is nothing but assigned homework and coming exams or sometimes family issues they worry about. None of this can bring excitement or at least freshness; even worse they may feel being trapped in the small world consisted of extremely familiar things all the time. 

When they have a friend between different generations, a brand new world would be presented. I had my English teacher who is far older than me as my friend when I was in high school. Although she was my teacher and the common topic for us was school life, she never mentioned that and always showed me the movies she preferred especially the foreign films I never heard. Through her words, I started watching those wonderful pieces of work and have appreciated many Hollywood-produced scenes. Without her, I will never get in touch with this. 

解读

用说理对例子进行对比打破文章僵局

抓住文章的关键词students进行思路延展

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同龄固然好

同龄朋友的竞争少不了

The other reason is that peers in campus are less likely to become friends. School life is, to some extent, similar to a work-like environment in which students are easy to compete with each other especially in examination, sports competition or final assessment. Some may say that true friends would not be affected by those and stand for peer influence, but who can give an affirmative idea to the potential? We have seen many upsetting cases causing by jealousy or green-eyed monster between peers. This can be avoided in friendship formed by different aged pals, who seldom have intersection in the same field or the same situation let alone the possible conflict. Even in the same places, the different ages are usually at different levels like the senior to the freshman in university or veteran to green hand in students union job. Not only would there be no contradiction, but those older or younger would like to help each other. 

解读

·陈述语气变反问顺势引入反方讨论

·用抽象例子替换具体例子让文章活起来

.一边反驳一边说理把忘年交的优点完全呈现出来

    ending   

开头既然套路深

结尾就要快速收

Friends should be those who either can expand one’s horizon or truly help with each other, therefore a different aged friend should be the right pick.