摘要:2018年10月11日雅思大作文参考范文
2018年10月11日雅思写作大作文题目如下截图:
本期雅思写作大作文范文,来自新航道雅思高分学员的原创范文,错误的地方,唐老师有修改:
Recent years are witnessing a growing criticism on the unequal access to tertiaryeducation. Students from rural areas are less likely to be admitted than are urban students. Personally, I believe that the inequality does need to be resolved urgently.
The first reason is that the easier access to college education would be an award for those students from the rural background, most likely unprivileged students, whosedesire for knowledge and ability to overcome the difficulty are admirable. If those students had 【虚拟,说明“没有”】abundant educational resources, includingqualified teachers, state-of-the-art facilities, and an updated curriculum, they wouldoutperform themselves who suffer the inadequate resources but manage to achieve acceptable levels. 【GRA方面:每个body段落有一个长难句即可。】【LR方面:表述正/负评价的词汇。】
【TR方面:城里的学生可能会觉得自己能上大学是天赋和家庭条件所致,可能不会感激社会;农村的学生因为收到关照而有机会上大学,可能将来会怀抱感恩之心报答社会。】
Second, the institutions’ generosity can be appreciated by those beneficiaries. Thedisadvantaged groups, since they receive aid without which they would not be in college, are highly likely to show gratitude to the favor and to pay the debt when they one day become capable. They are unlike urban students, theungrateful privileged youngsters, who tend to take their opportunity for granted. For example, their charitable actions inspired by their universities’ kindness to them, many philanthropists from a humble rural background are generous in giving back to society.
So in short, what measures should we do to handle this problem? To begin with, institutions of higher education, including the most selective colleges and universities, have to think about ways to recruit students from rural communities and enhance services to retain those less fortunate undergraduates. As a beginning step, it is necessary for government authorities in charge to help establish partnerships between high schools and universities, thus creating a fast track for more rural students to be enrolled through some special admission process. In addition, governments should make it a policy to reserve a certain percentage of entry into an undergraduate course.
In conclusion, easier admission should be available for students from rural backgrounds for at least two reasons. These youngsters deserve the opportunity and will appreciate the opportunity. 【通过deserve和appreciate两个动词笼统总结全文。】
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