2017-05-08 12:01来源:互联网作者:上海管理员
摘要:上周六的写作考试, 大部分考生的心情可谓是冰火两重天。打开卷面, 随之映入眼帘的就是一个地图题, 相信很多考生定是倒吸一口凉气。
上周六的写作考试, 大部分考生的心情可谓是冰火两重天。打开卷面, 随之映入眼帘的就是一个地图题, 相信很多考生定是倒吸一口凉气。 在写完小作文之后, 考生们肯定又是心花怒放的, 因为这道大作文的题目算得上是零难度的。教育类, 还是个报告题, 翻遍了近年题库恐怕也没有比这更简单的题目了。
原题如下:
Many children feel difficult to concentrate on their study. What are the causes? And what should be done to deal with this? 20170429
典型的零难度. 在真实的考场中, 对于备考良好的同学, 这种零难度的题其实也是可以发挥的. 例如, 找一些新颖的论点让自己的文章大放异彩.
Traditional schooling is losing its significance over children in this day and age, with a growing number of students hardly concentrating on their study. Parents and educators, thus, are quite eager to analyze reasons causing this situation and whereby provide feasible and effective solutions.
开头段还是一如既往地保守, 背景介绍之后稳妥地点出题目.
For one thing, distorted values and excessive usage of electronic devices lead to the loss of focus of students to their study. To begin with, a majority of students hold the illusion that there is no causality between their educational background and their career success in the future since some media always report successful entrepreneurs with inadequate education and even some overnight sensations who have never graduated from high school. Consequently, some students even think that they just squander away their valuable time in school. On top of this, undoubtedly some electronic devices can be definitely thought as the source of distractions. Many students cannot stop checking their mobile phone every 10 minutes while doing their homework, accordingly becoming phone addicts.
主段一, 回答个问题. 用并列的方式写两个论点.
For another, for solving this predicament thoroughly teachers and parents should work collectively. Initially, teachers should shoulder the duty of imparting appropriate values to their students, persuading them to put sufficient emphasis on their study. Also, teachers should make some rules and regulations of restraining use of electronic devices in schools like mobile phones. Besides, parents ought to be extremely careful of buying electronic products that are not related to children’s study. Traditional cell phones are more conducive to study of children in comparison to smart phones by which students can do so many things that they should have spent any time on.
主段二, 结构和主段一雷同, 仍然是并列的方式书写两个方案.
To sum up, it can be attributed to children’s inappropriate values and overuse of electronic devices that students are losing their attention to study, and luckily with parents and teachers taking reasonable measures this situation can be positively and effectively modified.
结尾段, 自然是总结全文. 其实报告性质的题目, 考生连所谓自己的核心立场都没有. 所以, 结尾段大可不必非得总结一个自己的想法. 免得画蛇添足.
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