摘要:20170325的作文该怎么写?我们一起来探讨下
2017年3月25日雅思写作大作文考题如下:
In the past, the main role of teachers was providing information. Today, however, we can get access to a wide range of information. Thus, there is no role for teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
关于老师的话题,近些年多次在考试中出现。审题之后,相信绝大部分的考生都会否定题干中的观点。下文亦是如此。
In the era of information, some people blindly begin to doubt whether teachers are still as significant as before for students due to the fact that students nowadays can be readily exposed to a huge amount of information. Those people ought to patiently and carefully imagine what would happen once teaching profession totally disappeared.
首段,其实只是通过了一个伴随状语介绍了全文的背景(这是一个信息时代),随后就主观地进行了点题。主观点题的意思就是在点题的同时,使用一些带有主观色彩的词汇来表达笔者的立场,如blindly等。开头段第三句话的根本作用是引出下文,并非所有文章都需要这样的承接下文的句子。
新航道雅思一对一,写作口语问题,一网打尽!
To begin with, parents would hardly know whether their children go to school or not. Without teachers’ maintaining school discipline, students were more likely to spend their time doing things that can arouse their interest. Unluckily, in most cases, what those students would do is completely not related to their study. Worse, playing truant would be a common choice for most of them.
段,重点强调了一个没有老师的世界的恶果。整段(乃至全文)都是反正法,通过假设老师这个职业已经在社会上消失,来推断后果。因此,全文论证多次使用虚拟语气。
On top of this, even though some students chose to stay at school to learn, they could merely learn a little without teachers’ assistance. Information they can obtain is always unordered and even with errors, so that they need someone who is able to help them organize and filter what they plan to learn. Undoubtedly, experienced teachers are the best persons providing help for those students struck in troubles in their study.
承接上一段,进行第二个恶果的推断。
Ultimately, future of those students would be thoroughly ruined assuming that no teacher in school could give them moral education. Misleading information and distorted value system might easily bring students extremely negative consequences. It is convincing that some of them would have misconducts or unhealthy life goal. Thus, the future they might have would be totally different from what they and their parents expected.
再次推断第三个恶果。本文为一面倒式的论证,不包含任何的让步段落。
In general, what teachers can do is far more than simply providing information for students, and hence in this day and age by no means should significance of teachers be ignored. Society without teachers would be what neither students nor their parents could stand.
结尾段,笔者再次重申自身主观立场。
关于本主题的雅思写作范文,我们还有一篇是来自唐老师的写作范文,具体请:雅思大作文7范文:老师在现代教育中没有作用
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