剑10G类testA雅思写作大作文范文

　　Writing Task 2

　　In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

　　参考范文2——犯罪的原因及针对性办法

　　In this essay, I will explore the causes of crime and how we can go about eliminating crime from our society by tackling the causes.

　　As we know, crime has become a hot issue in today’s society. It seems that not a day goes by without newspaper headlines such as “15 dead in gangland murder spree” and “Bankers steal 90 million from children’s charity” . The question is why? What drives people to do such I terrible things? I believe the cause of most, if not all, crime comes down to opportunity and education. Simply put, if a person has few options in life, he may become desperate for the things most of us take for granted (food, clothing etc) and steal them. On the other hand, if a I person has the opportunity to break the law for his own benefit and figures that the odds are I against them being caught, he is fairly likely to do so (banking fraud, confidence schemes and I such). In terms of education, either a person is unaware of the damage he causes, or he simply sees no other way to get what he wants. Both of these causes must be tackled if we wish to reduce crime in our societies.

　　I would recommend improving basic living standards to solve the problem of opportunistic crime. If the government provides all citizens with a house, food, clothing and health care, then there should be no reason for a person to steal. Further, an ethic of hard work should also be instilled in the citizenry - the idea that some people get more because they deserve it, either they work harder or are simply better at their job than other people, and therefore they should be rewarded for this. This should be indoctrinated in a person from birth. In this way, we would see people become more productive and less willing to cheat their way to their goals.

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　　在这篇文章中，我将阐释犯罪的原因，以及我们如何能够针对这些原因减少社会中的犯罪。

　　正如我们所知，犯罪已经成为当今社会的热点问题。几乎每天的报纸头条上都会有诸如此类的标题——“15人死于黑社会谋杀混战”或“银行家从儿童基金会挪用9000万”。问题是为什么?是什么驱使人们做出如此恶劣的事情?我认为大部分——即使不是全部——犯罪都是源于机会主义和教育缺失。简单来说，如果某人在生活中别无选择，他便会极其渴望得到大部分人都习以为常的东西(如食物、衣物等)，并盗取它们。从另一方面来说，如果某人有机会为个人利益而违反法律，并且认为被抓住的可能性不大，那么他极有可能会以身试法(如银行诈骗、信用欺诈等)。至于教育缺失，则指的是某人意识不到自身引起的伤害，或者是他找不到其他方式获取他想要的。如果我们希望减少社会中的犯罪，那么这两方面的问题必须得到解决。

　　我建议通过提高基本生活水准来解决机会主义犯罪问题。假如政府给予所有公民房子、食物、衣物和医保，那么人们就没有理由去偷盗。另外，还应该向所有公民灌输辛勤工作的道德观，即多劳者多得——他们或是工作更努力，或只是工作能力比他人更好，因此他们应该有所收获。这样的意识应该从一个人出生时就被灌输。这样一来，我们就能看到人们变得更有效率，而不再想用欺诈的手段达到目的。