2023年托福写作新题型范文集：Your professor is teaching a class on social studies. Write a post responding to the professor's question

4月11日，ETS在北京召开了全球发布会，宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息，托福考试迎来全面改革!

自2023年7月26日起， 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内，取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作，可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓：“短”和“学术”。

►关键字1：“短”：

改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作，而现在只要求100字，当然时间也缩短到10分钟。

表面上看，输出速度没有变化，都是10字/分钟。但是，构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思，再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”：2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言，然后形成自己的思路，马上动笔，绝 对不能拖泥带水。

►关键字2：“学术”：

旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目，比如《你愿意在家吃饭，还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备，只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。

改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你：在过去的两个世纪，推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想，这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备，比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然，学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。

为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数，今天小编整理了2023年托福写作新题范文集，本篇文章的主题是Your professor is teaching a class on social studies. Write a post responding to the professor's question.一起来学习一下吧。

12023年托福写作话题：

Your professor is teaching a class on social studies. Write a post responding to the professor's question.

In your response, you should:

• express and support your personal opinion

• make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

2托福写作新题范文示例1：

Professor

Life expectancies are increasing all over the world nowadays. Some of you probably know someone who is more than 100 years old. Before our next class, I want you to consider the following question:

What factors do you think have contributed to the increase in life expectancy? Is it due to advances in medical technology, improvements in public health, changes in lifestyle habits, or something else entirely?

Lisa

I think the main reason why people are living longer nowadays is recent advances in medical technology. Modern medicine has enabled us to better treat and manage chronic illnesses, and there have been major breakthroughs in areas such as cancer treatment and organ transplantation. As a result, people are able to live longer with diseases that may have been fatal in the past.

John

While medical technology has certainly played a role, I think improvements in public health have been just as important. We now have access to clean drinking water, sanitation systems, and vaccines that have dramatically reduced the incidence of infectious diseases.

Even a century ago, people didn't have access to any of these things. Additionally, public health campaigns have helped educate people about healthy lifestyle habits such as exercise, healthy eating, and not smoking, which can also contribute to longer lifespans.

32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2：

I would like to support Lisa’s idea that the unprecedented advancement in medical technology during the past decades has considerably accounted for the increasing longevity of modern people. Although the studies in lethal diseases like cancer still has a long way to go, it is likely that many of them are about to be overcome. In addition to the progress in medical technology, the improvement of health consciousness among the masses is a pivotal factor for the rise in average life expectancy. Fully aware of the significance of regular health examination, a large percentage of modern people are habituated to arrange for themselves and their families a complete physical exam at least once a year so that most potential illnesses could be detected early. Meanwhile, doing sports like jogging and boxing has now enjoyed a higher popularity among the public who wish to keep fit. Proven by a vast number of them, such a habit has indeed prevented them from illnesses related to overweight. To my thinking, these changes have to some extent explained the longer lifespan of people today.

AI 打分及评语

Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.

In the sentence "Although the studies in lethal diseases like cancer still has a long way to go," the subject-verb agreement is incorrect (studies should be plural, and have should be used instead of has). Additionally, in the sentence "Meanwhile, doing sports like jogging and boxing has now enjoyed a higher popularity among the public who wish to keep fit," the phrase "doing sports" should be replaced with "participating in sports" to sound more natural in English.