2023年新航道托福写作新题型范文集：Your professor is initiating a discussion on school uniforms. Write a post responding to the professor’s question

4月11日，ETS在北京召开了全球发布会，宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息，托福考试迎来全面改革!

自2023年7月26日起， 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内，取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作，可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓：“短”和“学术”。

►关键字1：“短”：

改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作，而现在只要求100字，当然时间也缩短到10分钟。

表面上看，输出速度没有变化，都是10字/分钟。但是，构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思，再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”：2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言，然后形成自己的思路，马上动笔，绝 对不能拖泥带水。

►关键字2：“学术”：

旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目，比如《你愿意在家吃饭，还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备，只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。

改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你：在过去的两个世纪，推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想，这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备，比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然，学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。

为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数，今天小编整理了2023年新航道托福写作新题范文集，本篇文章的主题是Your professor is initiating a discussion on school uniforms. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.一起来学习一下吧。

12023年新航道托福写作话题：

Your professor is initiating a discussion on school uniforms. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

In your response you should:

• express and support your opinion

• make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

2托福写作新题范文示例1：

Dr Gupta

School uniforms have been a topic of debate in education for decades, with proponents arguing that they promote a sense of community, while opponents argue that they can be costly for families. In today's class, we will discuss whether schools should require students to wear uniforms and explore the potential benefits and drawbacks of this policy.

Tom

I think schools should require students to wear uniforms. When I was in high school, wearing a uniform made getting ready for school easier and reduced the stress of deciding what to

wear. It also helped me feel more connected to my school community and allowed me to focus on my education.

Jerry

I have a different perspective. While I can see the potential benefits of school uniforms, I think it's important to consider the potential drawbacks as well. Many schools require uniforms to be purchased from specific vendors, which can be more expensive than purchasing clothes from other retailers. Some schools even require additional accessories and items to go along with uniforms, such as belts, ties, and shoes. It also adds to the overall cost.

32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2：

I strongly agree with Tom that schools should require students to wear uniforms because this could also help students learn how to view others properly. In other words, wearing uniforms helps students develop the value of judging each other by what they are rather than what they wear. As a class usually contains students from a variety of domestic backgrounds and the clothes they wear would to some extent reflect their families’ economic condition, if allowed to wear whatever they like, students especially those who tend to judge people by their external appearance would probably lose the opportunity to acquaint themselves with a seemingly poorly-dressed but actually creative and intelligent classmate. By contrast, if every student wears the same clothes, they would treat each other more equally and are more likely to pay attention to some interior characteristics such as reliability, independence or optimism of an individual student. For example, one of my classmates in high school, Jane, came from a deprived area, but we took no notice of that during the whole learning process because we all wore uniforms. And instead of being regarded as one of the socially-disadvantaged group, Jane was considered as kind-hearted and diligent.

AI 打分及评语

Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.

"the clothes they wear would to some extent reflect their families’ economic condition" (should be "the clothes they wear would, to some extent, reflect their families' economic condition"), and "they would treat each other more equally and are more likely to pay attention" (should be "they would treat each other more equally and would be more likely to pay attention").