2023年新航道托福写作新题型范文集：Your professor is teaching a class on a healthy diet. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.
4月11日，ETS在北京召开了全球发布会，宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息，托福考试迎来全面改革!
自2023年7月26日起， 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内，取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作，可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓：“短”和“学术”。
►关键字1：“短”：
改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作，而现在只要求100字，当然时间也缩短到10分钟。
表面上看，输出速度没有变化，都是10字/分钟。但是，构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思，再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”：2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言，然后形成自己的思路，马上动笔，绝 对不能拖泥带水。
►关键字2：“学术”：
旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目，比如《你愿意在家吃饭，还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备，只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。
改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你：在过去的两个世纪，推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想，这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备，比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然，学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。
为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数，今天小编整理了2023年新航道托福写作新题范文集，本篇文章的主题是Your professor is teaching a class on a healthy diet. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.一起来学习一下吧。
12023年新航道托福写作话题：
Your professor is teaching a class on a healthy diet. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.
In your response you should:
• express and support your opinion
• make a contribution to the discussion
An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.
2托福写作新题范文示例1：
Dr Gupta
With the rise of chronic diseases such as obesity, diabetes, and heart disease, the importance of a healthy diet in promoting overall health and wellness cannot be overstated. What are some actions that we can take to improve our diet and maintain good health, aside from just eating healthy foods?
Tom
One action that we can take to improve our diet is to eat more slowly. Eating too quickly can cause us to overeat and also affects our digestion. By taking the time to savor each bite and chew our food properly, we not only enjoy our food more, but we also give our bodies the time it needs to send signals to the brain that we're full.
Jerry
While I agree with Tom that eating slowly can help improve our diet, I think there's another action that is equally important. That action is to focus on the nutrient density of our food. For example, let's say that someone is eating slowly but they're only consuming foods that are high in calories, sugar, and unhealthy fats. On the other hand, if someone is eating foods that are nutrient-dense, such as fruits and vegetables, they're providing their body with the nutrients it needs to maintain good health.
32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2：
I agree with Jerry and Tom’s opinions which are eating slowly and focusing on the nutrition of food to promote our diet. From my point of view, I have the extra option which is eating on time to assist us in changing our meals to be healthier. Usually, people will have three meals each day- breakfast, lunch, and dinner. Our body has its schedule for taking food, and our digestive system will work regularly. For instance, factory-hand working time is from 9 AM-5 PM, and workers will work effectively during this period due to their daily routine. When people work overtime, they will feel tired and cannot finish assignments effectively. If we cannot eat food on time, our stomach will miss the best moment to obtain nutrition from what we eat, because it is not perfect timing for the stomach to operate. Thus, having a regular dietary habits can promote us to maintain better health.
AI 打分及评语
Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.
there are a few minor grammatical errors. For instance, in the sentence "If we cannot eat food on time, our stomach will miss the best moment to obtain nutrition from what we eat,
because it is not perfect timing for the stomach to operate," the phrase "because it is not perfect timing for the stomach to operate" seems redundant and could be rephrased.
Additionally, in the sentence "Thus, having a regular dietary habits can promote us to maintain better health," "dietary habits" should be singular, or the sentence should be
revised to say "Thus, having regular dietary habits can promote us to maintain better health."
