2023年新航道托福写作新题型范文集：Your professor is teaching a class on campus safety. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

4月11日，ETS在北京召开了全球发布会，宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息，托福考试迎来全面改革!

自2023年7月26日起， 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内，取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作，可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓：“短”和“学术”。

►关键字1：“短”：

改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作，而现在只要求100字，当然时间也缩短到10分钟。

表面上看，输出速度没有变化，都是10字/分钟。但是，构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思，再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”：2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言，然后形成自己的思路，马上动笔，绝 对不能拖泥带水。

►关键字2：“学术”：

旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目，比如《你愿意在家吃饭，还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备，只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。

改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你：在过去的两个世纪，推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想，这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备，比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然，学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。

为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数，今天小编整理了2023年新航道托福写作新题范文集，本篇文章的主题是Your professor is teaching a class on campus safety. Write a post responding to the professor’s question一起来学习一下吧。

12023年新航道托福写作话题：

Your professor is teaching a class on campus safety. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

In your response you should:

• express and support your opinion

• make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

2托福写作新题范文示例1：

Dr Gupta

As we all know, the issue of campus safety is a hot topic on our campus. What steps do you think our university can take to improve campus safety for all students, faculty, and staff?

Tom

I think one important step our university can take to improve campus safety is to increase the presence of security personnel on campus. This can include having more officers patrolling

the campus at all hours and installing more security cameras in high-traffic areas. Another step would be to provide regular safety training and education for all members of the campus

community, so that they know how to respond in the event of an emergency.

Jerry

I believe that our university can also do more to address the root causes of campus safety concerns, such as sexual assault and harassment. One step could be to provide more resources and support for survivors, including counseling services and reporting mechanisms that are easily accessible and confidential. Additionally, our university can work to create a culture of respect and consent on campus by implementing training programs and campaigns that promote healthy relationships and communication.

32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2：

I strongly agree with Tom's idea that more investment in security staff and equipment can make campus a safer place for students, faculty and visitors. I would add that the university

should make a risk assessment and development of a school safety plan which will help them prioritize safety and security improvements. Jerry raised the relevant point that more

supports for survivors can improve campus safety but she did not mention that what the victims need most is rapid and effective response from security staff to end the threat as

quickly as possible to save their lives, when the prevention is not enough. For example, the alert signal from security cameras can help the security personnel stop the crime before the

victims are further violated in the campus. Overall, then, I would say that campus safety can be improved with more well-trained security personnel and up-to-date equipment.

AI 打分及评语

Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.

The answer effectively expresses and supports the author's opinion, and makes a contribution to the discussion by providing additional suggestions to improve campus safety

beyond those already mentioned by Tom and Jerry. However, there are a few errors in the answer, such as the use of "development" instead of "developing" in the sentence "the

university should make a risk assessment and development of a school safety plan," and the use of "violated" instead of "harmed" or "injured" in the sentence "stop the crime before the

victims are further violated in the campus." Additionally, the sentence "Overall, then, I would say that campus safety can be improved with more well-trained security personnel and

up-to-date equipment" could benefit from further elaboration or explanation.