新航道团队说:你的雅思写作有以下语法错误吗?【马真老师】
1.雅思写作常见错误:主谓不一致
错误案例:When parents keep an eye on their children , he will behave well.
当家长盯着孩子的时候,孩子就会表现良好
解析: 前句子主语是parents, 那么后半句主语必须也是parents,而不是he .
修改: When parents keep an eye on their children, they can ensure about their children’s behavior.
2、雅思写作常见错误:句子主语总是用people
错误案例:If people do exercise more frequently. Then, they will have better health.
解析:这样的句子看似没有语法错误,但是并不符合雅思写作6分的水准。因为主语总是用“人”的话,句子就会变得非常简单,因此,建议大家可以换换主语。
修改:Doing frequent exercise is beneficial to people’s health.
(主语选用doing分词开头)
3、雅思写作常见错误:介词of 过多
错误案例: The past five years witnessed the remarkable development of online education of many schools.
过去五年,许多学校的网络教育得到大力发展
解析:该句子中连续使用两个“of”, 看上去十分累赘,of 强调属于,这句话我们只需要表示方位即可,也就是说我们只需要表达“在学校中的网络教育”,而不需要去强调“属于学校的网络教育”。
修改:The past five years witnessed the remarkable development of online education in many schools.
(将第二个of 改为in 来表示在很多学校里, 句子就变得好看多了)
4、雅思写作常见错误:词性不当
错误案例:The oil prices increased sharp by 5%.
剖析:sharp是形容词,但是increase是动词,我们应该用副词去修饰动词。
修改:The oil prices increased sharply by 5%.
5、雅思写作常见错误之指代不清
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后所用的代词不一致。
错误案例:The unemployment rates in the UK and Japan increased 25% over the past five years. It fell by 10% over the next two years.
在过去五年中,英国和日本的失业率上升了25%。其中,在未来两年,日本下跌了10%。
剖析:后半句it主语并没有指明是英国还是日本,产生歧义。
修改:The unemployment rates in the UK and Japan increased 25% over the past five years. But the number in Japan fell by 10% over the next two years.
(我们后半句主语使用了指代the number in Japan清晰点名了对象日本,如使用it则会让人摸不清头脑)
6、雅思写作从句使用错误
以下我们 拿一个定语从句来举例
错误点:不会使用during which连接前后两个半句
范文原句:This process is intertwined with the evolution of correlative species, during which the most adaptable species can be preserved and the inferior ones would be extinct.
这一过程与相关物种的进化交织在一起,在此过程中,适应性最强的物种得以保留,劣势物种得以灭绝。
错误使用定语从句:This process is intertwined with the evolution of correlative species, during this period the most adaptable species can be preserved and the inferior ones would be extinct.
错误理由:如果要使用during this period,那整个句子就出现了两个谓语动词is intertwined with 和can be preserved ,违反了语法规则,因此同学需要学习定语从句语法章节里面的during which的用法,来连接前后两个半句。
拓展:除了during which,我们也可以使用at which/in which/on which =where 具体介词看搭配。