剑桥雅思4test4写作task1范文（书信类）

剑桥雅思test4写作task1范文（书信类）

　　You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter

　　● say who you are

　　● give details of the accident

　　● suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.

　　a) 题目分析， 包括写作中需要涉及的要点以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。 

　　要点1. 事故必须发生在超市内， 而不是外面， 例如：在停车场。 2. 此事故是小事故而不是大事故。 3. 书信的格式 必须正式。

　　考生可能产生的错误理解和问题

　　1. 题目要求非常清楚， 应该不会对其有任何误读。

　　2. 考生 必须 提供 细节， 尤其 在 第 二点 和 第三 点上。

　　3. 书信 的 内容 不要 过于 感性。 b) 建议 的 写作 结构， 对比 此 结构 与 考生 有可能 采用 的 不恰当 结构。 内容 要 提及 超市 所在 位置， 还要 包括 事故 的 具体 细节， 例如: 地点、 损伤 及 日期。 给出 事故 的 原因， 并给 出在 将来 如何 避免 这一 问题 的 建议。 结尾 部分 应该 是有 好的 评论 而 不是 威胁 的 评论。

　　雅思写作范文

　　Dear Sir/ Madam,

　　I have been a frequent shopper at your Winchester branch for several years and have been very happy with your supermarket. However, last Saturday I was involved in an accident there, when numerous cans fell onto my head from a top shelf. My head was cut in several places and I had to be taken to hospital. I believe that the accident was caused by the cans being incorrectly placed on the shelves.

　　I would suggest that your staff take a lot more care in future when they place products on shelves. Also, it might be a good idea to avoid placing heavier items on top shelves in future, so that injuries like mine are avoided if items do fall off.

　　I am sure that the accident was not caused by any wish to harm anyone and will not be taking the matter further, but I would like your assurance that measures have been taken to prevent similar problems in the future. Yours faithfully, John Brown (164 words)

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