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　　2016年1月14日雅思A类大作文

　　2016.1.14雅思大作文题目

　　News reported that a 14-year-old boy who had seriously damaged school was made to clean the streets as a punishment instead of being sent to jail. Do you think young criminals should be sent to prison as a punishment? Or should alternative forms of punishment be used?

　　2016.1.14雅思写作范文

　　对于“打扫街道卫生“这个立场,我们应该是支持的态度,因为题目中所提到罪犯年仅14岁，在大多数国家的法律当中，未成年人犯罪都是需要从轻处罚的。因此，我们可以用“1. 小孩子心智不成热;2.小孩子的可塑注较强，应当以教育型惩罚为主”这两个观点来支持。

　　对于“送进监狱”这个立场，我们则是持不支持的态度。那么我们的写法就应当是先让步：监狱可以使孩子明白犯罪的严重性，并且针对让步进行反驳：但是孩子可能会受到监狱中其他罪犯的不良影响，不利于心理发育。

　　Children nowadays are exposed in a diversified environment where they have absolute access to internet, being able to befriend with people from a variety of backgrounds. This may result in children's antisocial behavior and there is a heat debate on whether teenagers who commit serious crimes should be punished by doing some volunteering jobs or being imprisoned.

　　Contributing to their community can be an effectively way to tell them that they are victimizing other people. One argument in its favor is that they are immature. It would be a difficult thing to predict the consequences of their behavior and law knowledge might not be sufficiently acquired at that young age. Another important factor in this respect is that they are form able in character compared to adult criminal, thus it is better to educate them. Doing something valuable to their society can embed a sense of responsibility in them and give them an opportunity to reflect on their deviance, which will truly rectify their criminality.

　　However, of course those who advocate custody sentence may have some plausibility to some extent.Allowing them to recognizing their mistakes is the priority of taking adolescent law breakers into prison. Once received harsh penalty,preventing persistent crime seems to be possible But the believers of this have ignored the issue over what if they are negatively influenced by other prisoners? How should they face the society with an ex-record especially when finding jobs.

　　In conclusion. I therefore believe that having faith in the young who go astray cannot be a more effective way to solve raging young criminal activities and taking responsibility for their living surroundings is the best way to do this.

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