2023年托福写作新题型范文集:Your professor is teaching a class on economics. Write a post responding to the professor's question

发布时间:2023-05-17 13:42

4月11日,ETS在北京召开了全球发布会,宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息,托福考试迎来全面改革!

自2023年7月26日起, 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内,取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作,可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓:“短”和“学术”。

►关键字1:“短”:

改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作,而现在只要求100字,当然时间也缩短到10分钟。

表面上看,输出速度没有变化,都是10字/分钟。但是,构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思,再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”:2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言,然后形成自己的思路,马上动笔,绝 对不能拖泥带水。

►关键字2:“学术”:

旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目,比如《你愿意在家吃饭,还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备,只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。

改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你:在过去的两个世纪,推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想,这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备,比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然,学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。

2023年托福写作新题型范文集:Your professor is teaching a class on sociology. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数,今天小编整理了2023年托福写作新题范文集,本篇文章的主题是Your professor is teaching a class on economics. Write a post responding to the professor's question.一起来学习一下吧。

12023年托福写作话题:

Your professor is teaching a class on economics. Write a post responding to the professor's question.

In your response, you should:

• express and support your personal opinion

• make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

2托福写作新题范文示例1:

Professor

Today we're going to talk about the debate between economic growth and protecting the environment. Economic growth creates new jobs and gives people money they can use to

improve their lives. On the other hand, if we protect the environment it can be enjoyed both by ourselves and future generations. If you had to choose between prioritizing economic

growth or protecting the environment, which one would you choose. Why?

Alex

I would prioritize the environment. We only have one planet and if we don't take care of it, we won't have pleasant lives in the future. Economic growth can be important, but not at the

expense of the environment. I think we need to shift towards more environmentally-friendly economic practices, such as investing in renewable energy and promoting environmentally-friendly technologies. We’ll all live much healthier lives if the world around us is clean.

Maggie

While I agree with Alex that environmental sustainability is important, I think that economic growth is the only way to solve many of the social and economic problems we face. We need

a strong economy to create jobs, reduce poverty, and improve standards of living. Not only that, but if companies grow stronger and more profitable, they might eventually develop new

technologies that solve our environmental problems.

32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2:

In my opinion, Alex is right when he says that we should highlight the environment rather than economic development. Admittedly, with great economic growth, the government can

have more funds to offer welfare and benefits to citizens and construct infrastructures, such as roads, schools, and hospitals, to satisfy individuals’ needs. However, we should

acknowledge that the current technologies can achieve the goal of protecting the environment as well. For example, today, we can produce degradable plastic bags and

straws to minimize non-degradable plastic waste. Besides that, millions of electric vehicles are consumed every year, which means that people will consume less fossil fuels and less

automobile exhaust will be produced. As a result, current technology can guarantee us a good economic system, so we should shift our attention to environmental protection. Only in

this way, can individuals live healthier than before, and our future generation can embrace pleasant lives as well. (151 words).

AI 打分及评语

Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.

There are a few grammatical errors in the response, such as the use of "consumed" instead of "sold" in reference to electric vehicles and the incorrect use of "guarantee" instead of

"ensure."

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