2023年新航道托福写作新题型范文集：Your professor is teaching a class on social etiquette. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

4月11日，ETS在北京召开了全球发布会，宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息，托福考试迎来全面改革!

自2023年7月26日起， 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内，取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作，可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓：“短”和“学术”。

►关键字1：“短”：

改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作，而现在只要求100字，当然时间也缩短到10分钟。

表面上看，输出速度没有变化，都是10字/分钟。但是，构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思，再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”：2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言，然后形成自己的思路，马上动笔，绝 对不能拖泥带水。

►关键字2：“学术”：

旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目，比如《你愿意在家吃饭，还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备，只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。

改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你：在过去的两个世纪，推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想，这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备，比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然，学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。

为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数，今天小编整理了2023年新航道托福写作新题范文集，本篇文章的主题是Your professor is teaching a class on social etiquette. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.一起来学习一下吧。

12023年新航道托福写作话题：

Your professor is teaching a class on social etiquette. Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

In your response you should:

• express and support your opinion

• make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

2托福写作新题范文示例1：

Dr. Hernandez

In today's society, people seem less concerned with good manners and civilized behaviors than ever before. On the other hand, if people really want to change the world for the better,

they have to risk being seen as impolite or uncivil. So here’s a question for the class discussion board: Do you think it is sometimes necessary to be impolite?

John

believe that good manners and civilized behaviors are always important, even when you need to express a strong opinion. Mahatma Gandhi is a good example of this approach, as

he used non-violent protests to fight for Indian independence without being rude or aggressive. However, being impolite can create unnecessary conflict and make it harder to

achieve our goals.

Sarah

I understand John's point of view, but I personally think that sometimes it's necessary to be impolite in order to make a change. For example, Rosa Parks was considered impolite when

she refused to give up her seat on a bus, but that act of defiance helped spark the civil rights movement. Sometimes being polite can also mean staying silent in the face of injustice.

32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2：

I agree with Sarah’s point that it is sometimes necessary to be impolite. I will add that there are two scenarios where it is better for people to be impolite. First, imagine a polite police officer who treats criminals nicely. If an officer like this is on the scene where he has to arrest a thieve and he asks the thieve kindly to put his hands behind his back, the thieve is likely to sense this opportunity to escape and will go for it. Therefore, it is common to see police officers use force to put criminals in cuffs. In addition, when people are being impolite, sometimes they are expressing their inner frustration and anger. For example, if a new mother is overwhelmed by the amount of work involved with taking care of an infant, and then one of the neighbors holds a party that wakes up the infant, the mother may knock on the neighbor’s door heavily and have a mental break up by shouting at the neighbor. This

behavior may be considered rude, but it is an important outlet of her feelings.

AI 打分及评语

Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.

The response provides a well-elaborated opinion that being impolite is necessary in certain scenarios, and the writer supports their opinion with clear and specific examples. However,

there are some grammatical errors and some sentences could be revised for clarity.

The response has some grammatical errors, such as missing articles and incorrect verb tenses, and some sentences could be revised for clarity.

Revised：I agree with Sarah's perspective that there are times when it may be necessary to be impolite in order to bring about change. In my opinion, there are certain situations where

being polite can actually hinder progress or even perpetuate injustice. For example, consider a workplace where an employee is being sexually harassed by a colleague. If the victim is

always polite and avoids confrontation, the harasser may not realize the severity of their actions and continue the behavior. In cases like this, being impolite and standing up for

oneself can be necessary to put a stop to the harassment.

However, it is important to note that being impolite should not be one's first course of action.

In many cases, being polite and respectful can be an effective way to communicate and work towards solutions.