雅思写作真题范文:childcare center

发布时间:2016-12-01 19:19

  雅思写作:childcare center这个题目还是比较简单的,如果你考前写过几个教育话题的话。剑桥真题里面也有很多讨论家庭和学校对孩子的影响的题目。不过今天这个题大家注意谈的是childcare center,指的是托儿所、保育院之类的,照顾的是小宝宝。大家不要写成学校了。

  雅思写作真题范文:childcare center

  题目:Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for children, while others think other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  雅思写作真题解析

  素材还是差不多的。托儿所的好处是老师更加专业(well-trained and professional),而爷爷奶奶一般年纪都大了,体力不支(weak in physical strength),还容易溺爱孩子(spoil)。另外托儿所里面还可以认识很多别的小朋友,锻炼交际能力,懂得与人相处,培养良好的性格和行为(develop good personality and behavior)。这些素材我们在教育话题都写得太熟了。

  家人照顾的好处是更加细心体贴(considerate),因为托儿所一个老师要照顾十多个孩子,难免会忽视孩子的感受。孩子有时候会有一种孤独感(sense of isolation),因为远离家人,他们也不太会表达自己。3岁的小孩连自己要什么东西都说不明白的(have difficulty in expressing their needs)。而爷爷奶奶爸爸妈妈才是最懂他们的人。

  结论段进行了一下总结,并且提出了一个建设性的意见,上日托是可以的(go to day care),但是不要上全托,就那种sleep at night in the nursery school。研究证明,长期离开家人是不利于孩子成长的。

  

  雅思写作真题范文:托儿所 vs 家人照思孩子(教育话题)

  题目 :Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for children,while others think family members like grandparents can do it better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  Different families may choose different ways to take care of children. There is adebate about whether children should be sent to childcare center or be looked after by their grandparents at home.

  The childcare center has well-trained and professional workers and teachers, who can provide speculized care for children. In comparison, if children stay at home, their old grandparents are often weak in physical strength and in many cases, they are spoilt by their grandparents. Another advantage of going to nursry school is that children can improve their social skills from a very young age. By playing with their peers, children would learn how to deal with other people, which is beneficial for the developmoit of their pcrscmality and good behavior.

  However, those who support family care think that children may feel a sense of isolation if they are away from their parents and grandparents. Young children usually have difiiculty in expressing their needs to other people and only their family members can truly understand what they want. Although the teaches in childcare centers are cxperienced. they need to watch dozens of little children and may neglect someone's emotions or needs. By contrast, grandparents are more considerate and make the baby more comforable.

  In my opinion, the childcare center is a good place where children can become a member of a community and leam the basic code of cooduct. But in tenns of their personal needs, I think grandparents can ofoffter better care for children. Going to day care on weekdays is not a bad choice, but I do not support children s living in the childcare center at night and away from their family mombers.

  关于这篇文章的写法,大家可以多多留意其中用到的对比论证。

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