2017年09月22日
剑桥雅思9Test4雅思写作Task2范文
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新航道雅思写作团队点题:
此类题目是近几年多次出现的考题,属于argumentative的立论型题。具体而言。题目的个要求To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?属于传统的片表达观点或现象发表看法并进行论证的形式。第二个要求则要对not important和will be easier之间的关系进行论证。
雅思写作Task2题目:
It is undeniable that so many kinds of languages and dialects exit in the multi-cultural world, which causes some complex and embarrassed situations while communicating with people holding different languages. Some predict that if some lesser-known languages vanish, we may enjoy a much easier lingual atmosphere. Personally I think it is entirely wrong.
雅思写作Task2范文:
Admittedly, to eliminate some languages that have been used in some certain parts of the world will make people's communication easier. Namely, English and other international languages will bridge over the lingual barriers to some extent. However, if a language disappears, the
culture behind it will not exist then shortly. Besides, the living habits and traditions relying on those language features will also die out with the loss of a language itself.
When it comes to the reasons for my disagreement, two aspects should be listed: for one thing, as mentioned above, language is no more than a way of communication. It is more likely to be a better symbol on special occasions, like some famous directors will thank all his helpers in English on stage when he is awarded by Oscar, but he will definitely thank his homeland in his native language at last, which represents a national pride vividly. For another, if it is possible to remove some lesser-known languages, some substitution will be used as English and French recently. However, the problem is the translation is not so perfect to transfer each cultural meaning and indication from a native surrounding to a western lingual way. The missing translation will lead to the loss of cultural diversity subconsciously.
In sum, some lesser-known languages should not be widely used for the globalization, but the preservation of those cultural-valued legacies should never stop until the extinction of the human beings.
作文结构分析:
此范文根据题目的要求相应地分为四段,段介绍题目背景并表明个人立场(positions);第二段开始做出让步,转而提出自己的反对意见;第三段阐迷自己持反对意见的两方面主要的原因;第四段再次强调自己的主张。
亮点词汇:
亮点语句:
1. Besides, the living habits and traditions relying on those language features will also die out with the loss of a language itself.
此外,基于语言本身的生活习惯和传统也将随着语言的灭亡一起消失。
2. Language is no more than a way of communication. It is more likely to be a better symbol on special occasions.
语吉绝不仅仅是一种沟通方式.它更像是一种特殊场合下的象征。