剑桥雅思9Test3雅思写作Task2范文(health话题)

新航道雅思 写作团队点题：

这个题目属于argumentation辩论型题目。题干中包含discuss both sides,则必须使用对称式结构。从思路上来说，比校难写，不容易找出理由。可以围绕以下思路:人们现在的工作、学习压力大，没时问运动:人们在空闲时一般都看电视、上网.不做运动等。

雅思写作高分范文 ：

A problem of modem societies is the declining level of health in the general population. One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle. However, there are some people who doubt whether the solution would have effects.

Advocates of this solution believe that increasing the number of sports facilities is the best way to improve the weU-being of people. First of all, nowadays people have to devote more time and energy to their careers and therefore they are too busy to spare time for physical exercises. If there were easy-to-reach local sports facilities, they would be more likely to take part in physical activities

regularly. Another reason is that today's sedentary lifestyle means that physical activity is no longer part of people's leisure time. If more sports facilities were offered, doing a variety of sports would be much more attractive than just sitting in front of a screen every evening.

However, there are some reasons why the solution may have little effect. In the first place, interest in sports is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract those who are already fit, not those who need them badly. What we should do is to help children develop a positive attitude to exercise at an early age. In the second place, there may be better ways of tackling this problem. For example, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health. Even improving the public transport would help because it takes a longer time to walk to the bus stop than to the car.

In my opinion, increasing the number of sports facilities may not have the desired results. People should be encouraged to form the habit of doing regular physical exercises when they are young. In addition, some better approaches may assist in improving people's health.

作文结构分析：

根据题目要求，此范文使用了对称式结构，文章分为四段:段介绍题目背景并简述双方观点:第二段对同意这种做法的观点进行了分析，并说明了两个理由:第三段时反对这个做法的观点进行了分析，也阐述了两个理由;第四段总结全文，提出自己的观点。

亮点词汇：

亮点语句：

If there were easy-to-reach local sports facilities, they would be more likely to take part in physical activities regularly.

如果有方便的运动设施，他们更可能会定期参加体育活动。

In the first place, interest in sports is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract those who are already fit, not those who need them badly.

，对运动的兴趣不是普逃的，增加的设施可能只会吸引那些已经很健康的人，而不是那些最需要这些设施的人。

For For example, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health.

比如，对高热量食物、烟草和酒施加高税，因为过多摄入这些会导致不良的健康状况。