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[2024/ 3/ 2] The line graph and pie charts below show the number of three groups of immigrants from 2000 to 2008 and the percentage of immigrants for different reasons in 2008.
【主体段分段】:按照图分段
Body 1:线图
Body 2:饼图
【开头段】
The line graph illustrates how long immigrants intended to stay in Britain between 2000 and 2008, and the pie chart compares different reasons for immigration for the year 2008.
【概述段】
It is clear that among all the three surveyed groups, more people chose to spend no more than 2 years in UK. Also, work and study were the primary reasons for migration to this country.
思路要点:
- 线图:up to 2 years的人数一直最 高
- 饼图:work和study的占比较大
【Body 1】
According to the line chart, we can find that originally, roughly 160,000 immigrants decided to stay in UK for up to 2 years. After a slight drop by 10,000 in the subsequent year, this figure soared to its peak at 250,000 in 2004. The following 4 years witnessed a period of steadiness in this figure. The number of people choosing to stay in UK between 2 and 4 years fluctuated at around 50,000 in the initial 5-year period, after which this figure nearly doubled in 2008. Besides, although no surveyed people opted for a stay of at least 4 years before 2001, we can see that 150,000 people made such decision in 2001 and this figure remained constant until the end of the given period.
思路要点:线图
- 橙色:第 一年160,000→2001年小幅度下降→2004年急剧上升到峰值→到2008年平稳
- 灰色:2000~2005年波动在大约50,000→到2008年上涨2倍数
- 蓝色:2001年前无数据→2001年数据为150,000→直到2008年平稳
【Body 2】
In terms of factors that attracted people to reside in UK, it is obvious that work was considered by 38% of the surveyed people. Also, 32% of the immigrants chose to live in this country for study, and this figure was twice as large as the percentage of people moving to this country for family reasons. Furthermore, both people migrating to UK for unclear and other reasons accounted for 7% respectively.
思路要点:饼图
- work数据为38%
- study数据为32%,是accompany/join family的2倍
- no reason stated和others都占比7%
以上就是小编今天重点为大家分享的关于小作文的内容,供大家参考了解。
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