2017年08月07日
剑10真题可能很多烤鸭都已经刷过了,江湖上也流传着很多关键剑10test3雅思写作task1范文,但是现编还是想和大家分享一下新航道雅思培训团队版本的范文。
Writing Task 1
The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summnarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
a)题目分析,包括回答中需要讨论的主要特征、需要进行的对比以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。
►►要点
1.在不同阶段,这种鱼的尺寸大小。
2.各阶段发生的时间和地点。
3.事件的顺序。
►►考生可能产生的理解错误和问题
考生也许会用进行时态而不是现在时态。考生也许会把各阶段的时间搞错。
b)参考范文
The diagrams show the life cycle of the salmon, from birth to mating and all that lies between.
The salmon begins its life in the slow moving upper reaches of a river, born from eggs hidden from predators among the reeds. Its gestation period lasts for approximately 5-6 months, at whichpoint the egg hatches and the baby salmon, or “fry” begins its journey to the lower river, livingin the fast current for four years until it becomes an adolescent. At this point, the adolescent fish, known as “smolt” will have grown to a size of around 15cm. Then it migrates to the open sea and starts its 5-year life there, during which time it finally develops into adult size (about 75cm). After that it turns around and begins the arduous process of returning upstream to the head of the river, where it will mate, lay eggs and thus continue the life cycle anew.
Whether or not the salmon is eaten by a lucky bear or ends up as a piece of sushi is not shown in this diagram.
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这张图表展示了鲑鱼的生命循环,从出生到交配及中间所有环节。
鲑鱼的生命起源于缓慢流动的上游河流,此时,鱼卵被藏在芦苇之间以躲避捕食者。鱼卵的孵化期大约持续5到6个月,之后鱼卵便孵化成小鲑鱼(即“鱼苗”)。鱼苗游向下游,在湍急的河流中生活四年,直到长成少年鲑3这时,少年鲑鱼(也就是“幼鲑”)将长成约15厘米长。然后,幼鲑游至广阔的大海,开始那里五年的生活,这期间它也最终变为成年身长(约75厘米)。之后鲑鱼调转方向,开始艰辛的溯河洄游过程。它们要回到河流的源头,在那里进行交配、产卵,从而继续新的生命循环。
至于鲑鱼是否会被一只幸运熊吃掉,或者是否会被做成寿司,这张图表并没有说明。