2023年托福写作新题型范文集：Your professor is teaching a class on marketing. Write a post responding to the professor's question.

4月11日，ETS在北京召开了全球发布会，宣布了托福考试全新升级的消息，托福考试迎来全面改革!

自2023年7月26日起， 托福iBT考试的时长将由3小时缩短至2小时以内，取消考试中的10分钟休息时间。其中改革比较多就是托福写作，可以用2个关键字抓住改革的精髓：“短”和“学术”。

►关键字1：“短”：

改革之前要求在30分钟内完成至少300字的独立写作，而现在只要求100字，当然时间也缩短到10分钟。

表面上看，输出速度没有变化，都是10字/分钟。但是，构思慢的学生要小心了。之前完全可以用10分钟构思，再用20分钟写作。现在必须“短平快”：2分钟内读完教授的邮件和学生留言，然后形成自己的思路，马上动笔，绝 对不能拖泥带水。

►关键字2：“学术”：

旧版托福写作有一些接地气的题目，比如《你愿意在家吃饭，还是去饭店?》。问的是个人偏好(Personal Preference)。考生不需要有什么知识储备，只要有生活常识和基本英文能力就能交出一份答案。即便是低龄考生和脱离学校很久的社会人士也可以得到不错的分数。

改革后的题目会“高冷”很多。比如一道样题问你：在过去的两个世纪，推动人类社会进步的最重要的发明是什么?题目还规定你不许讲电脑和手机。ETS示范的满分答卷讨论了“疫苗和抗生素”。但是仔细想想，这要求考生(1)了解科技进步史;(2)有话题词汇储备，比如vaccine, antibiotic, lifespan, pathogen。显然，学术讨论不是仅靠常识就能hold住的。

为了更好的帮助大家考好理想的托福写作分数，今天小编整理了2023年托福写作新题范文集，本篇文章的主题是Your professor is teaching a class on marketing. Write a post responding to the professor's question.一起来学习一下吧。

12023年托福写作话题：

Your professor is teaching a class on marketing. Write a post responding to the professor's question.

In your response, you should:

• express and support your personal opinion

• make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

2托福写作新题范文示例1：

Professor

Today, we're discussing the ethics of targeted advertising. Some people argue that online advertising which uses personal information to target specific people is an invasion of privacy. Others argue that it's simply an acceptable way to reach consumers with products and services they're interested in. What's your take? Do you think targeted advertising is ethical, or is it an invasion of privacy?

Jessica

I think targeted advertising is an invasion of privacy. Advertisers shouldn't be able to track and use our personal information to sell us products. It's not fair to consumers, and it's a violation of our rights. Instead, advertisers should focus on creating high-quality ads that appeal to a broad audience.

Mike

I disagree with Jessica. I think targeted advertising is ethical. It's a more efficient way to reach consumers with products and services that are relevant to their interests. Plus, consumers can always opt-out of targeted advertising by adjusting their privacy settings. As long as advertisers give users a choice, I think targeted advertising can be beneficial for both businesses and consumers.

32023年新航道托福写作新题范文示例2：

I refuse to countenance the view that targeted advertising is ethical. The fundamental reason for a detrimental impact is that when the platform gleans user behavior data without users’ permission, the user's privacy has been divulged. In fact, not only does the infringement of privacy exert a baneful impact on advertising effectiveness, but also it induces certain psychological repulsion to customers. In the era of information explosion, the information flow itself will penetrate into every nook and cranny of our own life, which inevitably sways people's psychology. Imagine, some audiences, if provided certain advertising to lure them to purchase by calling them directly, will feel unsettled, and psychological problems such as anxiety, restlessness and aversion will occur because they will treat these endless targeted advertising as nuisance. It is a commonplace that nowadays, many people, who receive the strange calls of targeted advertising out of blue when working, will subconsciously block the targeted advertising the moment certain ads appear on our phone, which is the sufficient evidence manifesting the apparent loath to the targeted advertising and it is out of question an unethical way of disseminating behavior.

AI 打分及评语

Based on the rubric, I would rate the following sample answer with a score of 4 out of 5.

There are a few grammatical errors, such as "gleans" instead of "gathers" or "collects," and "exert" instead of "exerts." Additionally, there are a few awkward phrasings, such as "I refuse

to countenance the view" instead of simply saying "I believe" or "I think." Despite these errors, the response is still well-written and makes a clear and persuasive argument.