2020年10月14日｜托福独立写作真题解析

10月14日托福独立写作

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Can two people be good friends if one person has more money than the other?

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解题：金钱是不是塑料友情的原因?友情的真谛在这一次考试中又被灵魂提问了。同学们在面对这种题目的时候一定要注意，尽管找出其他因素作为论述重点很重要，但也别忘了对题目观点进行直接的反驳。

Each individual can make friend with the person he or she likes, as long as they can consort each other. Though some relationships may break up because of the money, I believe the key to the close friends is never thewealth gap.

Ø 让步式开个头，承认有这种现象，但不认可它是主要因素

To begin with, true friends are not based on money but onmutuality. Friends are those who we always share joy and happiness with when making achievement. They are also those who we would turn to forcompany or comfort when encountering obstacles. Those are still those who we can hang out with when thinking about killing time. 【讲清楚友谊到底来自于什么?一次性给三个场景全部包含朋友】None of these depends on the actual money. It is the love and belonging that decide the likelihood of good friends. 【话语转回反驳金钱因素】For example, I have a friend with whom I can share all secrets and the relationship can trace back to our first meet in primary school. Even though one day I was surprised to find out that he was the successor of the billionaire in our city, this did not impact our friendship at all. Since then, we even became more intimate on account of the dyed-in-the-wool trust.

Ø 先点明友情的真谛，当然说理的同时也别忘记举例

Also, hardly can the income level be even between friends. Growing up in different family or with disparate educational background, people are definitely impossible to reach the same class with similar wealth. Even those may coincidently resemble, the distinctive way in working or learning may still differentiate them. 【说理说清楚相同不可能】Like the famous saying that it is impossible for the two leaves to look alike in the world, friends is no way to attain the nearly fortune. If this were real, wouldn’t it beridiculous for true friendship? 【假设情况进行加强】Just imagine two persons met and were prone to have the bond with each other, they would have to check the revenue or bankbook to ensure the property is allowed for following process. 【铺设一个场景进一步推进】Those who worry about this definitely misunderstand the actual core of close friends, which isaffection and dependence.

Ø 上一段完成了说理举例，这段采用完全反驳

Money may sometimes matter, but it is none of its business in building solid friendship. Only with true love can the relationship proceed.

Ø 最后，理论归于结论