雅思小作文真题示范｜动态柱状图：英国诊所非医疗岗位员工数量变化，附高分分段法

雅思小作文，看着不难，写起来却总差一口气——概括段不知从何下笔，主体段对比组选不对，模仿了无数范文，分数还是卡在6分上下。其实问题不在“基础差”，而是缺少一套系统的表达框架和语言训练。今天以一道诊所非医务人员数量变化的柱状图为例，带你拆解一种的分段方法：按变化幅度分组。变化大的行政、IT、保洁放一段，变化小的维修、保安放另一段。段落结构清晰了，对比逻辑自然就顺了。跟着这个思路练，小作文也能写出层次分明的7分水准。

The bar chart below shows the number of five different types of non-medical staff employed at a clinic in the UK between 2000 and 2015.

主体段分段方法：按照<变化幅度>分段

主体1：administrative staff，IT support staff, cleaners(变化幅度大)

主体2：maintenance staff，security guards(变化幅度小)

开头段

The bar chart illustrates changes in the number of employees across five non-medical roles in a UK clinic between 2000 and 2015.

概述段

Overall, the five positions exhibited varying trends, with IT support staff experiencing the most dramatic growth. Additionally, administrative staff remained the largest group throughout the given period.

思路要点：

五种岗位员工数量呈现不同变化趋势，其中IT support staff变化最急剧

administrative staff人数始终

Body paragraph 1

Three out of the five occupations saw significant changes over the 15-year period. Managerial staff more than doubled, rising rapidly from 45 in 2000 to 110 in 2015. Likewise, the number of IT engineers soared from just 5 to 55, representing an 11-fold increase. By contrast, the number of cleaners declined steadily from 30 to 10 during the same period.

思路要点：administrative staff，IT support staff, cleaners

有三种岗位人数变化显著

administrative staff：人数几乎上涨超过2倍，2000年为45→急剧上升到2015年达到110

IT support staff：200年为5→2015年急剧上升到55

cleaners：持从30持续下降到10

Body paragraph 2

The remaining two groups, however, experienced far less significant changes. Starting at 20 in 2000, the number of maintenance staff barely changed during the 15 years, dipping marginally to 19 by 2015. Meanwhile, despite minor fluctuations, the figure for security guards kept relatively stable at around 15.

思路要点：maintenance staff，security guards

其余两组员工人数变化幅度相对较小

maintenance staff：2000年为20→随后15年几乎不变，到2015年小幅度下降到19

security guards：轻微波动，但整体人数大约稳定在15

雅思小作文上分Tips

小作文看着简单，但写起来却常常遇到这些问题：概括句总觉得空、不知道写哪组对比;模仿范文也写了不少，但分数始终卡在6……

这类问题其实不是“基础差”，而是缺少系统的表达框架+语言训练。暑假是集中突破小作文表达力的黄金阶段，新航道写作课程会重点带你：

读图、概括、分段，掌握各类图表写作结构;

词组句型反复练，解决“不会写”或“太单薄”;

真题图表逐句拆解+精批，稳步语言准确度。

读图、概括、分段——小作文的每一步都有章可循。变化幅度分组法只是其中一个实用技巧，真正突破6分瓶颈，需要系统的表达框架和反复的语言打磨。暑假正是集中攻克写作短板的黄金阶段。新航道写作课程专为解决“写不出来、写不精彩”设计：各类图表结构全覆盖，高频词组句型反复演练，真题图表逐句拆解加专业精批，帮你从“会写”到“写好”。别再让千篇一律的模板拖累分数，这个暑假，让每一篇小作文都成为你的加分项。