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the bar charts below show information about driving license in a particular European country.
主体段分段方法:
一图一段
开头段
The first bar chart illustrates changes in the proportions of males and females holding a driver’s license from 1976 to 2006, while the second chart compares the percentage of male and female drivers aged 17-20 over the period from 1996 to 2006.
概述段Overall, although both genders experienced a rising trend in the proportion of driving license holders, males consistently outnumbered their female counterpart throughout the given period. Additionally, there was a decrease in the 17-to-20-year-old drivers.
思路要点:
- 1976-2006之间男女比例都上升,但都是男生比例>女生比例- 年轻司机(17-20岁)的比例下降
Body paragraph 1
In terms of the comparison betweenmale and female drivers, it is clear that there was an upward trend for both genders. The percentage of males grew steadily, rising from 70% to 80% between 1976 and 2006. The proportion of women also increased, but more significantly, doubling from around 30% to 60% during the same period.
思路要点:图1
- 男女比例都上升- males:1976年的70%→小幅度上升,到2006年达到80%- females:也上升,但变化显著,从30%上涨两倍,达到60%
Body paragraph 2
However, the proportion of young drivers (aged from 17 to 20) declined over the period. This decrease was particularly notable for females, with the figure dropping significantly from 30% in 1996 to 20% in 2006. Similarly, these years witnessed a slight fall in the percentage of male drivers, reaching 45% in 2006.
思路要点2:图2
- 17-20岁的年轻驾驶员数量呈现下降趋势- females:从1996年的30%显著下降到2006年的20%- males:小幅度下降,2006年达到45%