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【图表类型-table】

【考查要点：对比-不同时间(将来时间)】

The table below shows the percentage of people more than 60 years old in six different regions from 2000 to 2050.

The table illustrates the proportion of senior citizens aged over 60 years old in six countries in two separate years – 2000 and 2050.

【para 1: 简述表格信息，对比‘过去时间VS将来时间’】

【语言点解析】动词分词作后置定语

In 2000, with 23% of people reaching the age of 60, Japan witnessed the largest proportion. Distinct from Japan, a particularly small proportion was found in both India and China, whose figures were 8% and 9% respectively. In addition, the percentages in the USA, the UK and Germany were within a narrow range, being between 13% and 19%.

【para 2: 过去时间-对比‘数值大小’：强调60+人口比重最 大和最小的国家】

【语言点解析】独立主格结构;程度词的使用;定语从句;伴随状语

By 2050, India is also most noteworthy, as its population is likely to parallel that in 2000, ranking last. By stark contrast, despite a moderate decline, the highest level of aging population is likely to remain in Japan, and the estimated percentage is 19%. Similarly, there will be a slight drop in Germany. In addition, with growths found in the remaining countries, the USA, the UK and China, their proportions will all approximate to 20%.

【para 3: 将来时间和过去时间的对比：1. 数据未变-India, 比例始终最小;2. 数值减少-Japan & Germany, 前者比例始终最 大;3. 数值增加-剩余国家】

【语言点解析】程度词的使用;原因状语从句;独立主格结构

Overall, India and Japan were two most noteworthy countries in the past, and the year of 2050 will witness the same pattern.

【para 4: 特征总结-突出India和Japan的特殊性】