2022年7月9日雅思大作文真题参考范文:缺乏锻炼的原因和解决办法

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12022年7月9日雅思大作文题目

It is difficult for people who live in cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions could be taken to solve the problem?

22022年7月9日雅思高分范文及解析

Introduction

Nowadays, seldom do city-dwellers participate in outdoor activities. Behind such phenomenon are two predominant culprits, and hopefully some feasible approaches can be adopted.

解析

说明文,问原因和解决办法。也是去年上半年的主流话题:缺乏锻炼。审题中,it is difficult尽量写外因。类似话题:2021.4.17 Young people do not spend their holiday and weekend doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environment. Why? How to encourage them to go out?

Ø culprit n.[C] (不好事情的)原因


Reasons

To commence, the lack of public facilities for exercising should be responsible for this problem. This is mainly because the majority of metropolises have been occupied by residential areas with amenities to satisfy the demands of the surging population, as so many people have flooded into large cities for better job opportunities. In this case, it is hard for residents to seek an open area for outdoor exercising. Besides, it is due to the rat race in either study or work that people from all walks of life should work non-stop to have an edge over their counterparts. Naturally, wrapped up in their daily tasks, they lack either the time or the energy to have enough physical exercise.

解析

两点原因:1. 城市人口多而拥挤,缺乏公共运动设施;2. 平日工作或学业繁忙,没有时间体育锻炼。

Ø metropolis n.[C] 大都市

Ø amenity n.[C] 福利设施

Ø rat race 激烈的竞争

Ø counterpart n.[C] 相对应的人或事

Ø be wrapped up in 忙于做某事(以至于没有精力关心其他事)


Solutions

Considering the gravity of this issue, two schemes can be put on the agenda. The first imperative approach is that the government can allocate more budgets and sites to constructing public facilities like parks and sports centres. Given more accessible sports facilities, residents are more likely to get physical exercise whenever they are available. Additionally, educational institutions, businesses, and community can on a regular basis arrange several outdoor activities such as excursions, mountain-climbing, and sports meeting. In this way, students, young working professionals, and community members can be called on to slow down their pace and smell the roses.

解析

解决办法:1. 政府合理规划,提供设施;2. 学校、公司或社区定期组织户外活动。

Ø gravity n. [局势]严重性

Ø imperative adj. 迫切的

Ø excursion n. 远足

Ø working professional n. 上班族

Ø smell the roses 享受生活[尤指亲近自然]


Conclusion

In a nutshell, since possible factors and workable remedies have been clarified, this thorny issue can be promisingly addressed through joint efforts from several parties.

解析

一句话总结:各方通力合作,问题就能被解决。

Ø remedy n. 纠正方法

Ø thorny adj. 棘手的

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