雅思支招小作文地图3：“上帝”视角看计划性改变

分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一篇范文都经由专业团队反复校对，最终外教审查定稿。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。今天为大家推荐的作文是：雅思支招小作文地图3：“上帝”视角看计划性改变，一起来看看吧。

1雅思支招小作文题目

【类型】地图(非数据型图表)

【细分】改建(removal、replacements、additions)

【写作视角】“上帝视角”。注意：题图题的主体部分有三种视角(对应三种写作思路)：1)上帝视角(即俯视，当成平面图写);2)访客视角(即进入建筑或场地内部，以访客视线，按照线路图写);3)混合视角(即前两种视角混合着用)。老章不常用纯粹的上帝视角写，这一篇从而值得注意学习这种视角的写法。

2雅思支招小作文解析

# Introduction

The two maps depict the planned changes of a university’s sports center based on its current conditions. With replacements and additions, this facility will have greater versatility.

开头段，固定操作。说明图的主题，以及描述变化后的突出特点。

# Body

The entrance hall and the reception area will be expanded with a sports shop and a café in the west and east corners, while the central area of the premises will not change much, except that the gym will be extended eastward. The 25-meter swimming pool, the changing room and the seating zone will remain the way they are.

主体部分第 一段：按照图中箭头的指向，先描述一进门的区域的变化，从变化最 大的部分开始，进而写到变化小或者没有变化的部分。

Immense changes will be made on the outdoor courts, which are now independent of the central area. The west court will be removed, and as its replacement, a leisure pool and a changing room on its south will be built. The east court will also be replaced, and there will be a number of facilities where it is: the first is a sizeable sports hall that will share the wall with the seating area of the 25-meter pool; the second is a pair of dance studios that will be located directly opposite the sports hall; in addition, a changing room – adjacent to the café –will be built in the southeast corner.

主体部分第二段：视线转向至东西方向的区域。与上一段的思路相同，先写变化大的地方后写变化小的地方。注意：需要通过一些连接词向考官展示写作的逻辑顺序。

# Conclusion

With the planned changes, the sports center will be more multi-functional.