关于教育功能和作用雅思写作范文分享(纯干货)

发布时间:2021-07-02 15:59

雅思写作经典范文向来就是广大中国考生备考雅思的一个重要材料,因为雅思写作经典范围之所以能够获得高分,往往在结构、句型/词汇搭配上都有很多可取之处,下面就是小编为大家整理的一篇关于教育功能和作用雅思写作范文,希望大家看完能有所收获。

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Topic: Function of education. (Academic subjects and other subjects)

Thesis: Schools should make a balance between both rather than only emphasizes on academic learning.

What is the most significant factor in influencing the shaping of characters and personality of a child? Do academic subjects really render everything necessary for children’s all-round development? Most schools put major emphasis on academic teaching because it is believed that academic subjects can guarantee better future careers. However, in fact, other subjects such as literature, music and sports, are more crucial to children’s development for they can give children many things beyond academic learning, including teamwork spirit, endurance and healthy physical body.

It is true that academic subjects can teach children some fundamental knowledge and they can get further education and skills with such knowledge. But I don’t think academic learning can necessarily ensure better future careers. Academic learning is like the fundamental structure of architecture, it can only be improved and perfected by some other decorations, and that means it is supplementary subjects that can refine a child’s development.

Learning literature can make children sensitive to things around them and teach them to be careful observers; music can tell children how to relax them selves and get inspirations through the power of it; sports can build strong wills and bodies for children for it shows to them the spirit of endurance and teamwork. We know that all these qualities are badly needed in children’s social lives in the future, especially when they get along or work with other people, when they confront difficulties or obstacles, and so on.

What our society needs are not people who know nothing besides their textbooks, but people who know how to apply what they learn, know how to appreciate and endure in their lives, that means people with full sensibilities and practical skills; all these are not things children can learn from academic subjects.

In conclusion, I think schools should reach a balance between academic subjects and other ones, so that we can expect new generations with all-round development.

以上就是为大家整理的一篇关于教育功能和作用的雅思写作范文,其实在这些好的范文中我们可以学到很多东西,比如说句子搭配,论点的支持和结构的分布等。希望大家看完有所收获。


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