2021年2月25日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 高学历就能取得成功吗?
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本期作者:刘 静
1 2021年2月25日雅思大作文题目:
Some people believe that educational qualifications always bring success, while others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
22021年2月25雅思大作文 高分范文及解析:
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For some people, the most critical prerequisite for success is to receive a good education. However, there are other people, including me, believing that success does not always belong to those well-educated ones.
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The definition of success, in most people’s eyes, must be the accumulation of material wealth. This, in many cases, is achievable with a fancy degree, as it is always education that expands the human mind with knowledge and hones their skills, guaranteeing that they are competentand qualified for a high-paying job. Not only this, but the educational qualifications can also put people on the path of self-exploration, another facet of being successful. The underlying idea is that reading, writing, and learning on the shoulders of great minds help spark ideas andunlock potentials, with which one could lead a successful life, not financially, but spiritually.
解析
Ø 不过分贪恋长难复杂句,长短结合的段落读起来节奏感会更强。
Ø 根据写作任务要求先讨论方观点:学历可以带来财富上的成功及自我精神上的成功
Ø 本段的语法多样化:原因状语从句、强调句、分词短语后置、宾语从句、并列结构、同位语、表语从句、定语从句等。
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However, this is not always the case; otherwise, there would not be so many widely recognized people who have not actually received a decent education. These people’s achievements largely hinge on other elements, for example, their talents -deciding whether one could be a prominent artist, or their persistence and learning agility – characters that allow consistent self-improvement. Furthermore, sometimes, the higher the academic degree is, the more carefully people contemplate. Exactly because of this, well-educated people may behave hesitantly when facing new situations, whereas those less-educated are more straightforward. The time they bravely seize the chanceis when they outperform their competitors.
解析
Ø 揪住“always”这个单词讨论第二方观点:确实,学历不总会带来成功,因为成功还看中其他要素,同时学历不高的人往往更能一股劲往前闯不多想,恰巧抓住机遇。
Ø 本段的语法多样化:插入语结构、比较结构、对比结构、状语从句等。
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In conclusion, indeed, success is far from easily attainable without proper academic degrees. Yet, I have to reiterate that the degrees are not necessarily a guarantee of success, by which I mean it needs the combination of educational qualifications and other necessary qualities for one to blossom.