雅思大作文写作模板：分析解决型范文推荐

发布时间：2020-06-11 14:28

【大作文真题】

Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

肥胖在许多国家是一个严重的问题，特别是在富裕国家。讨论解决问题的方法。提供具体的理由和例子来支持你的回答。

【雅思大作文模板推荐】

With the advent of urbanisation and the rise in popularity of fast food, there have been accompanying issues with rising obesity rates – especially in developed countries like England and the USA. After providing a careful analysis of why obesity has risen so sharply in these countries, I shall suggest a number of ways in which the obesity epidemic can be ameliorated.

To begin with, it should be unsurprising that fast food is incredibly popular in wealthy countries (like England and the USA). Due to the high levels of development in these countries, consumers possess more money and can therefore consume vast amounts of fast food without seriously diminishing their income. For example, the American Dietary Association found that (compared to the average Indian household), the average American household has a six times larger budget for food per month. Consequently, it is to be expected that obesity rates are much higher in countries with larger amounts of wealth.

However, despite the severity of the obesity problem, there are a number of ways in which developed countries could battle it more effectively. Firstly, developed governments could put far more pressure on fast food outlets to provide healthy alternatives to hamburgers, french fries and soft drinks.

Secondly, public exercise initiatives could be advertised and promoted far more vigorously. Lastly, modules that inform teenagers about healthy dietary requirements could be taught at schools.

In conclusion, although obesity is a serious issue in the developed world, if the above steps are taken, the situation will surely improve in the coming years.

重难点词江信息

accompanying

释义

adj.陪伴的，附随的;

v.陪伴( accompany的现在分词); 陪同; 伴随…同时发生; 伴奏;

Perhaps the accompanying illustration will explain it.

可能所附的图表能对此作出解释。

Accompanying the letter is a parcel of books.

信外随带书籍一包.

She taught him to read and even to sing two or three little ballads, accompanying him on her old piano.

她教他读书,还教他唱两三首民谣, 弹着她的旧钢琴为他伴奏.

unsurprising