2019年3月14日雅思写作考试小作文参考范文及解析
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2019年3月14日雅思小作文题目 国内(A类):表格题
高分范文及解析
考核点:数据之间的“比较”关系
虽然题目中给出了2009和2010年两个年份,但是这个图其实是“同时不同项”。为什么呢?因为,表格中的数字是两个年份的差值,而不是分别列出了两个年份的数字。
三组很明晰:1、增长的(有多有少);2、下降的;3、没变的。
In the table is the statistical presentation [有那么一点“装”的措辞,开头段落里用来介绍图表也并非不可] (in percentage terms) [意为“以百分比的方式”] of the changed popularity of 8 Great Countries with visitors between 2009 and 2010.
Except in the UK, where there were 4 percent fewer visitors in 2010, and France, whose number of visitors stayed unchanged, there is either a surge or a marginal increase of popularity in the Great Countries. Germany stood out (stand out), as [状语从句里的内容有两种可能的表述方式,技巧在于主语不同表述即有区别] its popularity shot up (shoot up) by more than 10 percent // it witnessed a soaring number of tourists that contributed to the fastest growth in popularity.Following Germany closely, [有机会用一下动词分词引导状语] the US and China were the other two obviously more desired tourist destinations, both of which received nearly 10 percent more visitors.
*段落中三处非限定性定语从句用了三种不同的引导词。
The growth was moderate in Spain, as [这里故意没有用定语从句,而用了状语从句] the country’s reception of visitors rose by 6 percent. Meanwhile, it is noticeable that there was a minor increase of 1 percent in Turkey and a slightly bigger increase (2 percent) in Italy.
*措辞时尤其注意表示程度的形容词,和已经带有程度概念的名词或动词,以及句型的(刻意)变化。
Overall, the changed popularity varied (vary) from one country to another.
*笼统总结。尤其适合的情况:数据之间关系的规律不是那么明显,又不能去重复主体部分已经说过的内容。
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