2018年10月20日雅思小作文高分范文

2018年10月20日雅思写作小作文真题

The chart shows the patients' evaluation of a hospital’s three wards in four different aspects.

*how satisfied patients are with the three wards of the hospital

两个考核点：

1) 描述“比较”：bar charts, pie charts, tables, line graphs, maps;

2) 描述“(线性)变化”：line graphs, flow charts。

比较类型(一)：同时不同项

信息加工，确定写作内容：

1) 蓝色(Holly Ward)在四个方面都是maximum;

2) 红色(Roy Ward)和绿色(Oak Ward)不相上下;

3) Quality of Treatment是四个方面的maximum，对应于waitingtime是minimum。

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First, the hospital’s patients are most content with Holly Ward with the satisfaction rate ranging from 65 percent (waiting time) to 90 percent (quality of treatment). Secondly, Roy Ward outperforms Oak ward in two of the four aspects. While the advantage is marginal in terms of the waiting time: 60 percent versus 56 percent, it is however noticeable in the quality of after-treatment service, where the comparison is 71 percent to 61 percent. Likewise, Oak Ward outperforms Roy Ward in the aspects of hospital staff and quality of treatment. The difference therebetween is roughly 5 percent. In addition, in all of the three wards, the quality of treatment is the most satisfactory among the four aspects, and by contrast, the patients are most dissatisfied with the length of time of waiting.

【主语的频繁变化;语法现象的多样(Grammatical Range)】

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