雅思小作文高分词汇+句式汇总！

发布时间：2017-12-13 14:14

雅思小作文如何拿高分?最核心的技巧有4点：

运用词汇

描述主要趋势

对比突出

展现图表逻辑流程

其中，词汇运用是最最核心的，是其他三点实现的基础，根据小作文评分标准，词汇使用占据了雅思小作文25%的分数。

那么在雅思小作文中，怎么通过词汇表达来提高分数呢?下面为大家一一解答。

小作文词汇运用总原则

首先，雅思小作文词汇运用要坚持以下6个原则：

» Use correct synonyms in your writing.

使用正确的同义词

在写作中正确运用同义词，会给考官留下“词汇量很丰富”的好印象。

» Use a range of vocabulary.

使用丰富多样的词汇

» Do not repeat words and phrases from the exam question unless there is no alternative.

不要重复考试题目中的单词和短语，除非别无选择

» Use less common vocabulary.

不要使用太普通、老套的词汇

» Do not use the same word more than once/twice.

不要重复使用同一个词或超过两次

» Use precise and accurate words in a sentence.

在句子中使用简洁准确的词汇

小作文的结构如何展开?

一篇完整的小作文，其篇章结构应该包括以下几部分：

Introduction

开头介绍

这部分包括：

开头主题句(千万不要逐字逐句抄题目)

概述/总体趋势(眼看到图表显示的内容)

Reporting Details

描述细节

描述的主要内容包括3点：

细节中主要特点

数据对比分析(不要给出所有数字)

图表最突出的特征

Conclusion

结论(可选择写或不写)

这部分一般包括：

总体陈述

现象或趋势的影响

重要的评论

小作文每部分应该用哪些词?

小作文各部分有其具体的结构和表达句式，因此使用的词汇也各不相同，下面为大家总结了：

各个部分所用词汇和表达;

具体举例、使用技巧以及注意事项;

开头段所用的词汇汇总：

Starting 开头

The given / the supplied / the presented / the shown / the provided/ the

Presentation Type 图表类型

diagram / table / figure / illustration / graph / chart / flow chart / picture/ presentation/ pie chart / bar graph/ column graph / line graph / table data/ data / information / pictorial/ process diagram/ map/ pie chart and table/ bar graph and pie chart ...

Verb 动词

shows / represents / depicts / enumerates / illustrates / presents/ gives / provides / delineates/ outlines/ describes / delineates/ expresses/ outlines/ denotes/ compares/ shows contrast / indicates / figures / gives data on / gives information on/ presents information about/ shows data about/ demonstrates/ outlines/ summarises...

Description 描述

the comparison of…/the differences…/the changes.../the number of…/information on…/data on…/the proportion of…/the amount of…/information on.../data about.../comparative data.../the trend of.../the percentages of...

高分句式：

Examples :

1.The provided diagram shows data on employment categories in energy producing sectors in Europe starting from 1925 and till 1985.

2.The given pie charts represent the proportion of male and female employee in 6 broad categories, divided into manual and non-manual occupations in Freedonia.

3.The supplied bar graph compares the number of male and female graduated in three developing countries while the table data presents the overall literacy rate in these countries.

写作Tips:

1. 开头段一定要做到“惊艳”，它决定着考官的印象和你的整体分数。

2.千万不要逐字逐句地抄题目，这样做会扣分，应该用自己的话来改述引言部分。

3.开头介绍和总体趋势写在同一段落中，字数在75-80字左右。

4.在总体趋势描述中，不要给出具体的数字、百分比等，应该描述图表最醒目突出的特征。

大家可以对比下面2种描述：

✘ "A glance at the graphs reveals that 70% male were employed in 2001 while 40 thousand women in this year had jobs."

✔ "A glance at the graphs reveals that more men were employed than their female counterpart in 2001 and almost two-third females were jobless in the same year. "

第2种描述才是更加准确和地道的表达。

5. 如果是多种图表呈现，并且描述了不同类型的数据，你可以：

分别阐述，并用while将两者相连

The given bar graph shows the amount spent on fast food items in 2009 in the UK while the pie chart presents a comparison of people's ages who spent more on fast food.

也可以用 in combination 来一起阐述主要信息

The two pie charts and the column graph in combination depicts a picture of the crime in Australia from 2005 to 2015 and the percentages of young offenders during this period.

总体趋势描述词汇汇总：

In general

In common

Generally speaking

Overall/It is obvious

As is observed

As a general trend

As can be seen

As an overall trend

As is presented

It can be clearly seen that

At the first glance

it is clear

At the onset

it is clear that

A glance at the graphs reveals that...

高分句式：

Example:

1.In general, the employment opportunity has increased till 1970 and has dropped down afterwards.

2.As is observed, the figures for imprisonment in the five mentioned countries show no overall pattern of increase or decrease rather shows the considerable fluctuation from country to country.

3.Generally speaking, USA had a far more standard life than all the other 4 mentioned countries.

4.As can be seen, the highest number of passengers used the London Underground station at 8:00 in the morning and at 6:00 in the evening.

5.As an overall trend, the number of crimes reported increased fairly rapidly until the mid-seventies, remained constant for five years and finally, dropped to 20 cases a week after 1982.

细节描述主体段词汇汇总

开头段结束后，你需要另起一段来描述图表的主要特征，这一段被称为“主体段”。

根据图表的数量和类型，描述段落最多不超过3段。

主体段的开头短语：

As is presented in the diagram(s)/ graph(s)/ pie chart(s)/ table...

As (is) shown in the illustration...

As can be seen in the...

As the diagrams suggest...

According to the...

Categorically speaking...

Getting back to the details...

Now, turning to the details....

The table data clearly shows that...

The diagram reveals that...

The data suggest that...

The graph gives figure...

It is interesting to note that...

It is apparently seen that...

It is conspicuous that...

It is explicitly observed that...

It is obvious...

It is clear from the data...

It is worth noticing that...

It is crystal clear/ lucid that...

It can be clearly observed that...

It could be plainly viewed that...

It could be noticed that...

We can see that...

描述变化趋势的词汇汇总：

Increase增加

rise / increase / go up / uplift / rocket(ed) / climb / upsurge / soar/ shot up/ improve/ jump/ leap/ move upward/ skyrocket/ soar/ surge.

a rise / an increase / an upward trend / a growth / a leap / a jump / an improvement/ a climb.

Decrease下降

fall / decrease / decline / plummet / plunge / drop / reduce / collapse / deterioriate/ dip / dive / go down / take a nosedive / slum / slide / go into free-fall.

a fall / a decrease / a reduction / a downward trends /a downward tendency / a decline/ a drop / a slide / a collapse / a downfall.

Steadiness稳定不变

unchanged / level out / remain constant / remain steady / plateau / remain the same / remain stable / remain static/ level off /prevail consistency / plateaued / reach(ed) a plateau / stay uniform /immutable / stabilise/

a steadiness/ a plateau / a stability/ a static/ No change / a flat

Gradual increase 逐渐上升

an upward trend / an upward tendency / a ceiling trend

Gradual decrease 逐渐下降

a downward trend / a downward tendency / a descending trend

高分句式

Examples:

1.The expenditure of the office remained constant for the last 6 months but the profit rose by almost 25%.

2.There was a 15% drop in the student enrollment of the University.

3.The population of the country remained almost the same as it was 2 years ago.

Tips:

1. 'improve' / 'an improvement' 比较适用于描述经济状况，如果要描述具体数字，应该使用其他词汇，如increase;