2017.05.06雅思写作大作文范文（犯罪题材）

2017.05.06雅思写作大作文范文（犯罪题材）

原题：Young people who commit serious crimes (violent attack or robbery) should be punished in the same way as adults.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目翻译：犯了严重罪行(暴力袭击或抢劫)的年轻人应该像成年人用同样的方式惩罚。请问你同意不同意?

2017.05.06雅思写作大作文范文解析：

思路分析：本题上一次出现在2015年4月25日。有别于一般的犯罪类话题要求分析原因和解决方案等(延长监禁时间、进行教育等)，这道题在审题的时候需要大家对题目中的几个关键词young people、serious crimes、in the same way as adults进行思考。是不是要和成年人人一样对犯罪的行为用同样的方法审判，我们需要考虑到年轻人的年龄特殊阶段和思想不成熟性;我们也要想到这样做的严重后果，既考虑到对年轻人的影响也有对社会的影响。当然，完全不惩罚也是不行的，我们也可以从这方面进行思考。

2017.05.06雅思写作大作文范文：

P1：In many parts of the world, serious juvenile delinquency, such as robbery or violent attack, frequently appears as the headline in newspaper or TV programs. Some, therefore, insist that to deter it these young offenders should be penalized in regular court as adult criminals. However, I totally disagree with this proposal.

段翻译：在世界许多地方，严重的青少年犯罪，如抢劫或暴力袭击，经常出现在报纸或电视上成为头条报道。因此，有些人坚持认为这些年轻的罪犯应该在普通法院作为成年罪犯受到惩罚。然而我完全不同意这个建议。

P2：There are several sound reasons why these non-grown-ups should be judged differently. Firstly, they are mentally immature so that they cannot tell right from wrong. When committing serious crimes, they deem these acts as cool, being unaware that they are breaking the law. However, these adult criminals, in most cases, are capable of judging their activities and therefore should be completely responsible for their deeds.Secondly, this may pose more serious problems to these young people and society. Giving these young a heavier sentence means that they lose the chance to receive education and learn workable skills as their peers do. Thus, when released from prison years later, they may become unemployed and commit crimes again.

第二段翻译：非成年人的审判应该和成年犯区别开来是有一些非常有道理的理由。首先，他们在心智上是不成熟的，所以他们不能分辨对与错。当犯下严重罪行时，他们认为这些行为很酷，不知道他们触犯了法律。他们不像那些成年犯罪分子，那些人在多数情况下是有能力判断自己的行为也因此应该为自己的行为负责。其次，这有可能对这些年轻人和社会带来更严重的问题。给他们一个更重的审判意味着这些年轻人失去接受教育和学习工作技能的机会。这样等到多年后从监狱中出来后，他们有可能失业、继续犯罪。

P3：However, these convincing arguments in trying them differently than adults cannot deny the importance of punishing them. The prime reason is that punishment and sentences can serve to deter these underage felony offenders. In prisons, they, deprived of their freedom, will feel regretted for what they have done. Once out of prison (after finishing serving the sentence), they will start a new life and become good members of society. However, less-serious penalty will not reduce the number of young criminals effectively. Also, punishing these young law breakers can lessen the pains of the victims, which, to a certain extent, can help to maintain the social order.

第三段翻译：然而，这些令人信服的论点不能否认惩罚他们的重要性。首要的原因是惩罚和判决可以起着阻止他们未成年重罪犯的方法。在监狱里，他们被剥夺了自由，他们会为自己所做的事感到后悔。一旦出狱(服刑后)，他们可能会更加珍惜自由，有一个新的开始，成为社会的好成员。然而，不太严重的刑罚不会有效减少年轻罪犯的数量。此外，惩罚他们可以减轻受害者和他们的家人的痛苦.

P4：In conclusion, as the reasons mentioned above, I totally disagree with the idea that juvenile delinquent should be punished in the same way as adults. Punishing young criminals needs to consider more factors. On the one hand, justice must be served; one the other hand, judges and law makers need to avoid more serious results of punishing these young who commit crimes.

结尾段翻译：总之，由于上述原因，我完全不同意青少年罪犯应该像成年人一样受到惩罚的观点。惩罚这些年轻的犯罪分子需要考虑更多因素。一方面，正义必须要实现，另一方面法官和立法者也需要避免惩罚他们带来的更严重的后果。

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