剑10G类testA雅思写作task1范文两篇(书信类)

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  剑10G类testA雅思写作task1范文(书信类)

  Writing Task 1

  You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.

  White a letter to this friend, In your letter

  ·Give details of your study plans

  ·expain why you want to get a part-time job

  ·suggest how your friend could help you find a job

  a)题目分析,包括写作中需要讨论的观点以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。

  ▶▶要点

  1、信件开头一般需要向对方表示问候。

  2、考生需要阐述为什么需要赚取外快。

  3、向对方提出请求时,需要表达谢意。

  ▶▶要点考生可能产生的理解错误和问题

  1、不要遗漏必要的信息。

  关于本话题,新航道雅思培训团队一共为大家准备了两篇原创的范文,本篇先分享篇!

  Dear Jacob,

  I hope you’re doing well and this letter finds you in good health,As you know,I’m coming over to study nest semester and,while I’m very much looking forward to visting your lovely county,I’m a little bit worried about how expensive everything is over there and how long my student loans will last。Since I have around 20 hours of class a week,I thought I could use my free time to earn some extra money,If it’s not too much trouble,du you think you could help me look for a job?Pretty much anything would do – bar work,a shop assistant,waiting tables or something like that。If you see any “help wanted” advertisements while you’re around town,or in a newspaper,could you let me know?

  Again,I hope this isn’t too much trouble,but any help would really be appreciated.

  See you soon,

  Septembrus

  (169 words)

  亲爱的Jacob:

  希望你一切顺利,并谨以此信,祝你安康。正如你所知,下一学期我将出国学习。尽管我十分期待游访你美丽的国家,但是我还是有点担心,不知道那里的物价有多高,学生贷款又能持续多长时间。由于我每周上课时间约为20个小时,我想我可以利用业余时间去赚些外快。如果不算太麻烦的话,你可不可以帮我找一份工作?基本上什么工作都可以——酒吧服务员、商店售货员、餐厅服务生或者类似工作。如果你外出时或看报时看到任何的“招聘启事”,能否告诉我?

  再次希望这不会太麻烦你,但真诚地感谢你的所有帮助。

  再见!

  Septembrus

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