雅思写作范文及解析:gap year

发布时间:2016-11-28 18:59

  2015年2月28日雅思写作范文:gap year,据说是盗剑桥原题,我现在看到的有两个版本。

  雅思写作题目:gap year

  version1: Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

  version2: Some people think that family has the most powerful influence on child's development. Other people, however, believe that other media (such as television, friends and music etc.) influence more. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  剑桥5test2 writing task2 后有剑桥官方提供的sample answer,就想跟大家一起研究下这篇官方范文,看看考官们都喜欢什么口味儿的文章。

  雅思写作范文:gap year

  It is quite common these days for young people in many countries tohave a break from studying after graduating from high school.The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time. 

  The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world.By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on.They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms ofcoping with the challenges of student life.

  However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age.TS Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course.But overall I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.

  My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons.That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.

 

 

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