雅思大作文:新手爸妈是否应该参加育儿课程?

发布时间:2016-06-21 14:07

2016年5月28日雅思写作话题:新手爸妈是否应该参加育儿课程?

写作思路整理:

表明同意参加育儿课程的观点有两个

1年轻夫妇初为父母,缺乏经验和方法。参加育儿课程可以帮助他们掌握一些正确的育儿方法和技能,更好的应对孩子成长过程中会出现的一些问题, 从而有助于孩子健康成长。

Inexperienced (adj. 无经验的) young couples can benefit greatly from childcare training courses. By attending these courses, new parents are able to learn some professional methods, master systematic knowledge and acquire relevant skills about child rearing(育儿), so as to be better prepared for the potential problems and challenges confronting them, which will in turn contribute to the physical, emotional and psychological well-being of their children.

2参加育儿课程可以让年轻夫妇对如何抚养孩子有更深刻的理解,更明白自己的责任和义务。比起把孩子送到日托中心,请保姆或者让老人帮忙带孩子来说,父母对于孩子的性格培养和精神成长是更重要的。

Childcare courses can improve parental roles as the first educators of their children, helping couples gain a deeper understanding of their parental responsibilities. Instead of hiring a nanny(n.保姆),sending children to daycare centers or their grandparents, fathers and mothers are supposed to make use of what they have learned in the courses to take good care of their children, because parents, undeniably(adv. 不可否认地) and indisputably(adv. 无可反驳地),play a role of greater importance in early childhood education, especially in terms of a child's personality development. It is no exaggeration to say that quality care, which could be learned in parenting courses, will have a huge impact on the future success of children.

 

表明反对参加育儿课程的观点有两个

1市面上关于育儿的书籍和视频资源有很多,所以年轻爸妈没有必要特意参加育儿课程。

There is no need for parents to take childcare courses because there are plenty of resources on child upbringing available, be they print, broadcast or Internet-based. E-learning,for instance, has become increasingly widespread (adj.分布广的) thanks to the proliferation(表示rapid increase,快速增长) of mobile technology.

2参加育儿课程会增加困家庭的经济负担,不现实也没有必要,因为很多国家给贫困家庭提供育儿帮助和支持。

It is unrealistic(adj. 不现实的) and unnecessary for poor families to take parenting class, which, in itself, is neither attractive nor productive. Childcare subsidies (n. 补贴) and services, infinitely preferable to courses, are introduced and provided in many countries for the sake of children's development and growth.

 

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