2018年11月10日雅思写作小作文真题：The table below shows the number of people having private cars in every 1,000 people in six countries in 2009, 2010 and 2011.

既可以用“比较”法来写作，也可以用“(线性)变化”法来写作：因为时间是连续的

推荐：按照“(线性)变化”法来写作

信息加工，确定写作内容：

1) 一路升：the US, the UK, China, Germany：China最突出(2010年的300到2011年的500)，其他国家稳定升，在三年里都是minimum;

2) 升了降：France, Canada

3) 同时有“比较”：theUS在三年里都是maximum。

来自新航道雅思培训班 高分学员范文：

China was most noteworthy among the countries where private car ownership kept increasing during the three-year period. In the US, the UK and Germany, the growth was steady, either 50 or 100 cars a year. In China, there was an annual increase of 100 cars between 2009 and 2010, and the number spiked to 500 in 2011. In addition, China is noticeable also because its car ownership was lower than that of any other country throughout the three years.

Every 1,000 French people owned 600, 650 and 550 cars in the three years, and the fluctuating car ownership also happened in Canada, where the number varied significantly between the years, surging [surge] from 400 to 800 and then sliding [slide] to 700. It is also notable that all of the three years witnessed that the US had the highest car ownership.

【主语的频繁变化;语法现象的多样(Grammatical Range);表示变化/趋势的动词(及对应的名词)】

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目标

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